Comments received on poems by mwrites
Do I give up?
paulamcnealy said:
Honey you are wasting you time. He doesn't deserve your love. If he really wanted you he would have Never said he doesn't want a relationship. I don't to sounds cruel but the facts is he just doesn't want it with you. Cont sale yourself short. Only give your love to a man that is deserving of your heart because in the end it will only break you down. Know your own worth. He is NOT worthy.
May 29th, 2016 10:54
paulamcnealy said:
Honey you are wasting you time. He doesn't deserve your love. If he really wanted you he would have Never said he doesn't want a relationship. I don't to sounds cruel but the facts is he just doesn't want it with you. Cont sale yourself short. Only give your love to a man that is deserving of your heart because in the end it will only break you down. Know your own worth. He is NOT worthy.
May 29th, 2016 10:54
Do I give up?
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS "M" for a beautifully penned poem - but the content is so so frustrating. It is a "Love Poem" but it is unrequited love. When a read such a poem from a Lovely Lady frustrated by an Unfeeling Man it sometimes makes me feel ashamed of my masculinity. I am a Gentleman and always love and cherish my Ladies. Thanks for sharing such a painful story. Thinking of you and yes - You should give up and find a new Man who is worthy of you ! Yours BRIAN
May 29th, 2016 09:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS "M" for a beautifully penned poem - but the content is so so frustrating. It is a "Love Poem" but it is unrequited love. When a read such a poem from a Lovely Lady frustrated by an Unfeeling Man it sometimes makes me feel ashamed of my masculinity. I am a Gentleman and always love and cherish my Ladies. Thanks for sharing such a painful story. Thinking of you and yes - You should give up and find a new Man who is worthy of you ! Yours BRIAN
May 29th, 2016 09:31
Blood (12/02/2016)
jccaramelbarbie said:
wow, so deep, yet dark, gives people alot to think about, great job awesome
May 7th, 2016 13:16
jccaramelbarbie said:
wow, so deep, yet dark, gives people alot to think about, great job awesome
May 7th, 2016 13:16
Blood (12/02/2016)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MILLIE - A very challenging first poem ! Always remember "Our life is in our BLOOD" and we've only got 8 pints ! Losing some blood does give release and often our pain and sngst seeps away with our blood - but remember "Your life is in your BLOOD" tt's awesome the red hemoglobin in our blood picks up oxygen from our lungs and takes it to all the cells in our body which need oxygen to provide energy. The CO2 that is produced as the glucose (fuel) in our body is consumed to provide energy for heat and movement etc is transferred by the BLOOD back to the lungs. The BLOOD picks up more oxygen to keep us alive. There is nothing more precious than BLOOD it is "liquid life". Thanks for sharing - BRIAN.
May 7th, 2016 09:13
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW MILLIE - A very challenging first poem ! Always remember "Our life is in our BLOOD" and we've only got 8 pints ! Losing some blood does give release and often our pain and sngst seeps away with our blood - but remember "Your life is in your BLOOD" tt's awesome the red hemoglobin in our blood picks up oxygen from our lungs and takes it to all the cells in our body which need oxygen to provide energy. The CO2 that is produced as the glucose (fuel) in our body is consumed to provide energy for heat and movement etc is transferred by the BLOOD back to the lungs. The BLOOD picks up more oxygen to keep us alive. There is nothing more precious than BLOOD it is "liquid life". Thanks for sharing - BRIAN.
May 7th, 2016 09:13
