Comments received on poems by Seraphel
Lord Déraciné
sorenbarrett said:
Duality from the dark side. This poem is threatening. Nicely written
August 15th, 2026 18:09
sorenbarrett said:
Duality from the dark side. This poem is threatening. Nicely written
August 15th, 2026 18:09
BARE WITNESS
sorenbarrett said:
Voyeuristic, erotic, cannibalistic, vengeful, sexual, violent, sadistic, masochistic, all come to mind. Well done
August 14th, 2026 05:02
sorenbarrett said:
Voyeuristic, erotic, cannibalistic, vengeful, sexual, violent, sadistic, masochistic, all come to mind. Well done
August 14th, 2026 05:02
Devourer
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hunger and digestion and a metaphor as well. Well done
August 13th, 2026 16:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of hunger and digestion and a metaphor as well. Well done
August 13th, 2026 16:53
Yearning: Mutual Cannibalization
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write where fluids are exchanged as a bond. Well written
August 10th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write where fluids are exchanged as a bond. Well written
August 10th, 2026 09:40
The Same Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in its meaning so poetically said it has to be a fave.
August 9th, 2026 04:13
sorenbarrett said:
Deep in its meaning so poetically said it has to be a fave.
August 9th, 2026 04:13
Duality
sorenbarrett said:
The two sides of a coin the Janus face. When one makes a choice one must accept both sides. Well written
July 12th, 2026 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
The two sides of a coin the Janus face. When one makes a choice one must accept both sides. Well written
July 12th, 2026 11:31
Beautiful Opinions
sorenbarrett said:
Alice in wonderland or behind the looking glass. Applied poetically in this write with a few bends in the road. Well done.
June 9th, 2026 20:23
sorenbarrett said:
Alice in wonderland or behind the looking glass. Applied poetically in this write with a few bends in the road. Well done.
June 9th, 2026 20:23
The Flock
sorenbarrett said:
Seraphel this poem is magnificent in its pairing of what the world calls evil and holy and the inversion that in the gestalt makes them both one and the same. Its language is almost religious in nature taking on a prophetic style. It proclaims and speaks with power. There are many good lines in it and the use of the murder of crows paired with the gathering of souls makes for a wonderous image of good and evil being one in the same. The need for a villain for there to be a hero is a central theme and echoes the gospel of Judas excluded from the Bible. This is a well thought out piece that at the same time speaks from the soul. Nicely done and a fave
June 3rd, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Seraphel this poem is magnificent in its pairing of what the world calls evil and holy and the inversion that in the gestalt makes them both one and the same. Its language is almost religious in nature taking on a prophetic style. It proclaims and speaks with power. There are many good lines in it and the use of the murder of crows paired with the gathering of souls makes for a wonderous image of good and evil being one in the same. The need for a villain for there to be a hero is a central theme and echoes the gospel of Judas excluded from the Bible. This is a well thought out piece that at the same time speaks from the soul. Nicely done and a fave
June 3rd, 2026 04:03
What’s Funny Now?
sorenbarrett said:
This feels like calling someone out for fake behavior. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
This feels like calling someone out for fake behavior. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:01
Molting Season
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in many ways existential in its proclamation. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in many ways existential in its proclamation. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:40
Would You Die For Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective write where one allows things to continue to avoid worse consequences. This sounds most real.
April 3rd, 2026 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective write where one allows things to continue to avoid worse consequences. This sounds most real.
April 3rd, 2026 20:07
