Comments received on poems by Seraphel
The Flock
sorenbarrett said:
Has this poem been reworked I believe I just read it from its posting yesterday?
June 3rd, 2026 04:10
sorenbarrett said:
Has this poem been reworked I believe I just read it from its posting yesterday?
June 3rd, 2026 04:10
The Flock
sorenbarrett said:
Seraphel this poem is magnificent in its pairing of what the world calls evil and holy and the inversion that in the gestalt makes them both one and the same. Its language is almost religious in nature taking on a prophetic style. It proclaims and speaks with power. There are many good lines in it and the use of the murder of crows paired with the gathering of souls makes for a wonderous image of good and evil being one in the same. The need for a villain for there to be a hero is a central theme and echoes the gospel of Judas excluded from the Bible. This is a well thought out piece that at the same time speaks from the soul. Nicely done and a fave
June 3rd, 2026 04:03
sorenbarrett said:
Seraphel this poem is magnificent in its pairing of what the world calls evil and holy and the inversion that in the gestalt makes them both one and the same. Its language is almost religious in nature taking on a prophetic style. It proclaims and speaks with power. There are many good lines in it and the use of the murder of crows paired with the gathering of souls makes for a wonderous image of good and evil being one in the same. The need for a villain for there to be a hero is a central theme and echoes the gospel of Judas excluded from the Bible. This is a well thought out piece that at the same time speaks from the soul. Nicely done and a fave
June 3rd, 2026 04:03
What’s Funny Now?
sorenbarrett said:
This feels like calling someone out for fake behavior. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:01
sorenbarrett said:
This feels like calling someone out for fake behavior. Well written
May 8th, 2026 16:01
Molting Season
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in many ways existential in its proclamation. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:40
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems in many ways existential in its proclamation. Nicely done
April 5th, 2026 03:40
Would You Die For Me
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective write where one allows things to continue to avoid worse consequences. This sounds most real.
April 3rd, 2026 20:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most reflective write where one allows things to continue to avoid worse consequences. This sounds most real.
April 3rd, 2026 20:07
