Comments received on poems by Tacchi, Charlotte
Pervy Jackson and the Olympians
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Charlotte, there’s a reflective depth here…you’re not just naming traits, you’re engaging with what’s underneath them. It feels like you’re trying to understand each character on a deeper level, and that gives the piece a grounded, human quality. Thoughtful and well expressed. Also…full disclosure…a very (I am sure) unintentional title typo has now inspired a completely different satirical poem on my end…so be on the lookout for that one...and thank you ahead of time! 😂 Your piece became the muse in the most unexpected way. That aside, strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Charlotte, there’s a reflective depth here…you’re not just naming traits, you’re engaging with what’s underneath them. It feels like you’re trying to understand each character on a deeper level, and that gives the piece a grounded, human quality. Thoughtful and well expressed. Also…full disclosure…a very (I am sure) unintentional title typo has now inspired a completely different satirical poem on my end…so be on the lookout for that one...and thank you ahead of time! 😂 Your piece became the muse in the most unexpected way. That aside, strong piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 17th, 2026 11:04
Pervy Jackson and the Olympians
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Was the title a typo? Lol C and V are right next to each other
April 17th, 2026 06:14
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
Was the title a typo? Lol C and V are right next to each other
April 17th, 2026 06:14
Pervy Jackson and the Olympians
sorenbarrett said:
Curious transformation in form, gender, myth and time. A cute surreal write
April 17th, 2026 06:09
sorenbarrett said:
Curious transformation in form, gender, myth and time. A cute surreal write
April 17th, 2026 06:09
Teen-Hood
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Charlotte, there’s a straightforward honesty here that works in your favor…you’re not trying to dress it up, just saying what it feels like and where it can go. That mix of struggle and encouragement gives it a grounded, real voice. It lands with clarity and purpose. Strong piece, Charlotte. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:26
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Charlotte, there’s a straightforward honesty here that works in your favor…you’re not trying to dress it up, just saying what it feels like and where it can go. That mix of struggle and encouragement gives it a grounded, real voice. It lands with clarity and purpose. Strong piece, Charlotte. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
April 16th, 2026 16:26
The feeling of spring
sorenbarrett said:
Well composed the season and weather all put into one in this piece
April 15th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Well composed the season and weather all put into one in this piece
April 15th, 2026 06:30
The feeling of love you can\'t show
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of love unrequited
April 14th, 2026 07:05
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of love unrequited
April 14th, 2026 07:05
Mystical Mist ( Misty)
Doggerel Dave said:
Since you provide no information about yourself, I must assume you are female and young and obviously have no autonomy. A sad situation as you clearly have a good heart.
April 14th, 2026 04:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Since you provide no information about yourself, I must assume you are female and young and obviously have no autonomy. A sad situation as you clearly have a good heart.
April 14th, 2026 04:37
Mystical Mist ( Misty)
Alex Arnot said:
A solemn good bye can sometimes sting worse than a final farewell, especially when you don\'t know where they\'ve gone. Great write!
April 13th, 2026 20:06
Alex Arnot said:
A solemn good bye can sometimes sting worse than a final farewell, especially when you don\'t know where they\'ve gone. Great write!
April 13th, 2026 20:06
