don\'t build her up just to bring her down
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SAPPHIRE - Thanks for a very powerful first poem. It is well structured and pulsates with rhyme and rhythm empowering the accusations of the words. In a good poem there is always a symbiosis between structure and subject. I'm a male and often we are guilty of not treating our Ladies with the respect they all deserve. Ladies are what makes the World a much much better place ! I love your contrasts: Build up - bring down # lead on - shut out # cause to smile - then hurt. Complementing her - BUT - In her heart - She always knew it was way too good to be true. Men - our Ladies deserve our respect let us resolve to always be true to them ! Thanks for caring and sharing - BRIAN

May 8th, 2016 02:41