BLUE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME NMC - Nice first poem - plenty of rhyme and rhythm. Makes it easy to read and smooth to recite ! Water is a good "medium" for a Love Poem. Ocean blue of eyes - riptide saltiness of lips and drowning in blue - drowning in you - awesome. Great structure and content - thanks for sharing - BRIAN

May 8th, 2016 18:18