Comments received on poems by Fathima Shaw



Oh How I wish
Silentpain said:

Desiring someone so deeply, he should be made known that you exist.

September 25th, 2026 07:53

Oh How I wish
sorenbarrett said:

A poetic dreaming and desire that remains unfulfilled. Nicely done

September 21st, 2026 14:57

The Beautiful Truth
sorenbarrett said:

A great juxtaposition of opposites it speaks of a different perspective. Nicely worded

May 26th, 2026 15:00