Comments received on poems by Janey_Boo
Purple
sorenbarrett said:
The repetition the simple is what it is statements the use of senses and the association of the color with an emotional state and feeling all give this a fave. It was fabulous!!! So simple, so pure, innocent, childlike it was poetry to me
May 29th, 2026 08:20
sorenbarrett said:
The repetition the simple is what it is statements the use of senses and the association of the color with an emotional state and feeling all give this a fave. It was fabulous!!! So simple, so pure, innocent, childlike it was poetry to me
May 29th, 2026 08:20
Purple
2781 said:
Purple fruit is delicious, if ripened on the vine: in premium condition, makes the sweetest wine.
May 29th, 2026 07:52
2781 said:
Purple fruit is delicious, if ripened on the vine: in premium condition, makes the sweetest wine.
May 29th, 2026 07:52
Deja Vu
NafisaSB said:
stories read, seen, and heart - captured by your imagination and set in beautiful verse - inspiring...
May 20th, 2026 00:58
NafisaSB said:
stories read, seen, and heart - captured by your imagination and set in beautiful verse - inspiring...
May 20th, 2026 00:58
I Wish
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, I think many people who have lived through emotional harm will recognize that feeling of wanting someone to truly understand the damage they caused…not defensively, not superficially, but fully. The simplicity of the language makes the hurt feel even more immediate. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, I think many people who have lived through emotional harm will recognize that feeling of wanting someone to truly understand the damage they caused…not defensively, not superficially, but fully. The simplicity of the language makes the hurt feel even more immediate. Excellent piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:41
Deja Vu
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this really moved me. That deep ache for something you can almost feel but can’t fully place carries through every section of this piece. The shifting lives and moments make the longing feel timeless…like love and loss echoing across generations. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this really moved me. That deep ache for something you can almost feel but can’t fully place carries through every section of this piece. The shifting lives and moments make the longing feel timeless…like love and loss echoing across generations. Beautifully written, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 18th, 2026 09:32
I Wish
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded in the wish for others may not know indeed the harm they cause. A sad poem of pain not understood
May 18th, 2026 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
So well worded in the wish for others may not know indeed the harm they cause. A sad poem of pain not understood
May 18th, 2026 09:08
Deja Vu
sorenbarrett said:
An intimate link in human emotion that outlives years and goes beyond race, gender or age it is a living link in all things that unify us beyond time. Well written
May 17th, 2026 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
An intimate link in human emotion that outlives years and goes beyond race, gender or age it is a living link in all things that unify us beyond time. Well written
May 17th, 2026 13:16
Deja Vu
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like memory without permission—like the heart remembering stories it was never handed, yet somehow still carries their weight,
There’s a haunting tenderness in it, like longing stretched across time until it starts to feel like inheritance rather than imagination.
May 17th, 2026 09:03
Thomas W Case said:
Feels like memory without permission—like the heart remembering stories it was never handed, yet somehow still carries their weight,
There’s a haunting tenderness in it, like longing stretched across time until it starts to feel like inheritance rather than imagination.
May 17th, 2026 09:03
Unnatural Nature
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this really moved me. The grief here feels so deeply human because it isn’t only mourning death…it’s mourning neglect, loneliness, and the terrible realization of how invisible someone can become while still alive. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 07:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this really moved me. The grief here feels so deeply human because it isn’t only mourning death…it’s mourning neglect, loneliness, and the terrible realization of how invisible someone can become while still alive. Powerful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 17th, 2026 07:59
Unnatural Nature
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story of greed and cold feelings that leave us all isolated. Nicely written
May 16th, 2026 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
A sad story of greed and cold feelings that leave us all isolated. Nicely written
May 16th, 2026 13:42
Unnatural Nature
Fränz Müller said:
Quite moving. Sorry to say I have seen this sort of thing a lot over the years, the estranged family coming after death to loot the deceased. We can only do so much in this life. Blessings to you.
May 16th, 2026 12:58
Fränz Müller said:
Quite moving. Sorry to say I have seen this sort of thing a lot over the years, the estranged family coming after death to loot the deceased. We can only do so much in this life. Blessings to you.
May 16th, 2026 12:58
Tears On A Prayer
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “Missing is different than regretting” is such a strong line. It immediately establishes the emotional complexity of the entire piece with brutal clarity. Fantastic work. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:45
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “Missing is different than regretting” is such a strong line. It immediately establishes the emotional complexity of the entire piece with brutal clarity. Fantastic work. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 15th, 2026 09:45
Tears On A Prayer
sorenbarrett said:
A strong statement made here especially in the ending. Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
A strong statement made here especially in the ending. Nicely done
May 15th, 2026 06:46
Honeyed Lies and Butterflies
Fränz Müller said:
Well done and I love the way you structured this one!
May 14th, 2026 12:31
Fränz Müller said:
Well done and I love the way you structured this one!
May 14th, 2026 12:31
Honeyed Lies and Butterflies
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this has such a raw emotional progression to it. Butterflies become lies, sweetness becomes rot, and love turns into something poisonous and performative. The experimental formatting only deepens the unraveling. Beautifully painful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this has such a raw emotional progression to it. Butterflies become lies, sweetness becomes rot, and love turns into something poisonous and performative. The experimental formatting only deepens the unraveling. Beautifully painful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 14th, 2026 11:32
Honeyed Lies and Butterflies
sorenbarrett said:
Deception lies in this poem. Well written it flows like the honey downward to the end dripping on the ground. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
Deception lies in this poem. Well written it flows like the honey downward to the end dripping on the ground. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 09:01
Missing Out
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this captures that restless desire to fully live before life slips by…whether through poetry, nature, crowds, dreams, love, or neon chaos. The ending brings it all together beautifully in that “in-between” space. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this captures that restless desire to fully live before life slips by…whether through poetry, nature, crowds, dreams, love, or neon chaos. The ending brings it all together beautifully in that “in-between” space. Wonderful piece, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 13th, 2026 20:17
Missing Out
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem they say and so I hear here. Well written
May 13th, 2026 17:15
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem they say and so I hear here. Well written
May 13th, 2026 17:15
Midnight Mistakes
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What stayed with me most here, Janey, is “I don\'t need to face you to know you\'re looking at me.” That line absolutely aches with intimacy and trust. It captures that strange awareness of another person’s presence so perfectly. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 07:17
Tristan Robert Lange said:
What stayed with me most here, Janey, is “I don\'t need to face you to know you\'re looking at me.” That line absolutely aches with intimacy and trust. It captures that strange awareness of another person’s presence so perfectly. Beautiful work, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 07:17
The Beginning of The End
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this is stunningly cinematic, my friend. The intimacy of two people facing the end of the world together gives the entire piece this aching mixture of terror and tenderness. The imagery kept unfolding larger and larger while still feeling emotionally grounded. Beautiful work and welcome to MPS. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 07:16
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Janey, this is stunningly cinematic, my friend. The intimacy of two people facing the end of the world together gives the entire piece this aching mixture of terror and tenderness. The imagery kept unfolding larger and larger while still feeling emotionally grounded. Beautiful work and welcome to MPS. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
May 12th, 2026 07:16
Midnight Mistakes
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem speaks of a bond and love for what is valued above passion. A passion all its own not sexual but of a higher order. Well written where the running of time reminds us life is running out and decisions made carry us to the end. A fave
May 12th, 2026 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully worded this poem speaks of a bond and love for what is valued above passion. A passion all its own not sexual but of a higher order. Well written where the running of time reminds us life is running out and decisions made carry us to the end. A fave
May 12th, 2026 07:06
The Beginning of The End
Paul Bell said:
A peaceful death is all we can wish for.
The world will still explode when we\'re gone and the memories will still linger.
Its what we leave that counts.
May 11th, 2026 09:23
Paul Bell said:
A peaceful death is all we can wish for.
The world will still explode when we\'re gone and the memories will still linger.
Its what we leave that counts.
May 11th, 2026 09:23
The Beginning of The End
sorenbarrett said:
Heroes die with an explosion poets die in silence only their echoes remain. Well written
May 11th, 2026 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
Heroes die with an explosion poets die in silence only their echoes remain. Well written
May 11th, 2026 07:49
