Comments received on poems by Chuck Peterson
The Unfinished Present
William A. Poppen said:
This hit me, \"Sometimes I need other people
to carry the parts
I can\'t hold myself\"
July 16th, 2026 09:40
William A. Poppen said:
This hit me, \"Sometimes I need other people
to carry the parts
I can\'t hold myself\"
July 16th, 2026 09:40
Living Map
sorenbarrett said:
As the topography of living changes so one finds oneself lost and at times not even knowing who one is. Nicely written
July 12th, 2026 09:18
sorenbarrett said:
As the topography of living changes so one finds oneself lost and at times not even knowing who one is. Nicely written
July 12th, 2026 09:18
Carrying the Secret
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of courage and fear of being who one is and being able to voice it. Well written
July 9th, 2026 19:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of courage and fear of being who one is and being able to voice it. Well written
July 9th, 2026 19:00
What I Learned Too Late
sorenbarrett said:
The complexities of a relationship even with parents. Nicely written about identify and acceptance
June 22nd, 2026 20:04
sorenbarrett said:
The complexities of a relationship even with parents. Nicely written about identify and acceptance
June 22nd, 2026 20:04
Borrowed Shadows
sorenbarrett said:
Society makes demands on us to conform. To that we surrender our identity. Well written
June 16th, 2026 18:55
sorenbarrett said:
Society makes demands on us to conform. To that we surrender our identity. Well written
June 16th, 2026 18:55
Living with Depression
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic collage of depression nicely done
June 14th, 2026 18:56
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic collage of depression nicely done
June 14th, 2026 18:56
The Unfinished Present
sorenbarrett said:
Trauma like the windows can be distorted with time. Sometimes it is worn away and forgotten at others it is warped to be worse than it was it can scar and distort visions through it. Well written
June 13th, 2026 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
Trauma like the windows can be distorted with time. Sometimes it is worn away and forgotten at others it is warped to be worse than it was it can scar and distort visions through it. Well written
June 13th, 2026 19:18
Fading Echoes: A poem about letting go of what you thought was true and stepping into uncertainty
sorenbarrett said:
The circle of life in this poem well done
June 11th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
The circle of life in this poem well done
June 11th, 2026 07:45
A Cage I Named Comfort
sorenbarrett said:
A mind provoking write. In your author\'s note you cited that the rules meant to protect you confine you and indeed they do and so in society as well. It is a two edged sword that must be used wisely not to cut oneself. Nicely written
June 9th, 2026 04:02
sorenbarrett said:
A mind provoking write. In your author\'s note you cited that the rules meant to protect you confine you and indeed they do and so in society as well. It is a two edged sword that must be used wisely not to cut oneself. Nicely written
June 9th, 2026 04:02
