-rainy day dreams-
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRISK - Love the visual - love the poem - Acrostics are my fave poetic form. Your content mirrors your title perfectly and (like rain !) your acrostic has flow and rhythm. Rat-a-tat-tat - heaven's tears - bringing life - BUT - drowning me. Lovely fluid us of language and feeling ! Dreaming about the Sun - but (sadly) - the rain continues to fall ! Clours - bitter sweet endings - but endless sorrow of heart. Love the optimism in the ending - My smile will rise - I'll continue to dream - lovely. I've written lots of ACROSTICS (please check) I wish I'd written this one - well done. BRIAN

May 12th, 2016 04:15