Comments received on poems by Nerd
What happened?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem when memories are nightmares. Self esteem must be built not on the foundation of the past but the firm ground of the present. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem when memories are nightmares. Self esteem must be built not on the foundation of the past but the firm ground of the present. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:22
What did I step into?
sorenbarrett said:
Manga of a sexualized nature can stimulate the steam and heat as well as the shower. How the perspective changes. Well done
July 8th, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
Manga of a sexualized nature can stimulate the steam and heat as well as the shower. How the perspective changes. Well done
July 8th, 2026 09:01
What did I step into?
Demar Desu said:
I shouldn’t be visualizing… sigh great poem nonetheless
July 8th, 2026 08:15
Demar Desu said:
I shouldn’t be visualizing… sigh great poem nonetheless
July 8th, 2026 08:15
I’m sorry
sorenbarrett said:
Short and yet reveling so much about the one speaking and society\'s demands. Well done
July 8th, 2026 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
Short and yet reveling so much about the one speaking and society\'s demands. Well done
July 8th, 2026 03:27
I’m sorry
Demar Desu said:
A true poet doesn’t eat when they’re hungry! Do be sure you’re hydrated though… great poem
July 7th, 2026 22:14
Demar Desu said:
A true poet doesn’t eat when they’re hungry! Do be sure you’re hydrated though… great poem
July 7th, 2026 22:14
A rush of a view
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem could be taken as sexual but regardless it feels
July 6th, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem could be taken as sexual but regardless it feels
July 6th, 2026 12:30
Feelings start to fade
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad poem using metaphor well as a bridge between feeling and nature or reality of the external. In line eight you might choose to remove the first from in that it is used again a couple of words latter and this confuses the meaning. Or the line might be rewritten retaining the first from and removing the second. It is a well written piece that sends its meaning clearly and conveys a sense of sadness of not being noticed or cared about.
July 5th, 2026 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad poem using metaphor well as a bridge between feeling and nature or reality of the external. In line eight you might choose to remove the first from in that it is used again a couple of words latter and this confuses the meaning. Or the line might be rewritten retaining the first from and removing the second. It is a well written piece that sends its meaning clearly and conveys a sense of sadness of not being noticed or cared about.
July 5th, 2026 05:17
Just me and you on Fourth of July
sorenbarrett said:
This poem combines the fireworks of holiday with sparks of passion. Nicely worded it is explicit in a sexual explosion.
July 4th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem combines the fireworks of holiday with sparks of passion. Nicely worded it is explicit in a sexual explosion.
July 4th, 2026 06:57
Flower Food
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling not acceptable and not worthy of being chosen even when one makes sacrifices. Well said
July 3rd, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling not acceptable and not worthy of being chosen even when one makes sacrifices. Well said
July 3rd, 2026 04:16
First Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its overt sexuality sends a message of one looking for acceptance and unity. Nicely worded
July 2nd, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its overt sexuality sends a message of one looking for acceptance and unity. Nicely worded
July 2nd, 2026 03:31
What title do I give my face?
sorenbarrett said:
Why is it so hard to see oneself accurately? This a poem of poor self esteem that needs adjustment to reality
July 1st, 2026 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Why is it so hard to see oneself accurately? This a poem of poor self esteem that needs adjustment to reality
July 1st, 2026 11:31
Where can I buy sour cream?
lunarchloedip said:
now i want doritos and sour cream!!! thanks!!!!
June 30th, 2026 14:45
lunarchloedip said:
now i want doritos and sour cream!!! thanks!!!!
June 30th, 2026 14:45
Where can I buy sour cream?
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain things that one longs for and their rarity make them all the more desirable. A short but so human write.
June 30th, 2026 14:23
sorenbarrett said:
There are certain things that one longs for and their rarity make them all the more desirable. A short but so human write.
June 30th, 2026 14:23
Gingerbread Man
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome. This metaphor is a most unusual one and causes the reader to think. Gingerbread is sweet and from the oven warm two elements in common with love. It is a cute write. Well done.
June 30th, 2026 03:44
sorenbarrett said:
Welcome. This metaphor is a most unusual one and causes the reader to think. Gingerbread is sweet and from the oven warm two elements in common with love. It is a cute write. Well done.
June 30th, 2026 03:44
