Comments received on poems by Nerd
Exploring my breasts and find hate
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a fierce, unsettling defiance here—your body claimed as your own, not something to be consumed or understood by someone else. It pushes into discomfort on purpose, turning vulnerability into something jagged and confrontational.
August 9th, 2026 07:54
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a fierce, unsettling defiance here—your body claimed as your own, not something to be consumed or understood by someone else. It pushes into discomfort on purpose, turning vulnerability into something jagged and confrontational.
August 9th, 2026 07:54
A Day In The Life Of A Hopeless Romantic
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nerd, what a tender piece. The romantic dreaming is lovely, but it’s that desire for someone whose hand is still there on the darkest days that really got me. That’s the kind of love worth dreaming about. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:41
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nerd, what a tender piece. The romantic dreaming is lovely, but it’s that desire for someone whose hand is still there on the darkest days that really got me. That’s the kind of love worth dreaming about. Wonderful write, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️
August 8th, 2026 08:41
A Day In The Life Of A Hopeless Romantic
Fränz Müller said:
Yearning for romance is not hopeless! It’s a core desire of us all. Fan that spark into a flame!
August 7th, 2026 20:48
Fränz Müller said:
Yearning for romance is not hopeless! It’s a core desire of us all. Fan that spark into a flame!
August 7th, 2026 20:48
A Day In The Life Of A Hopeless Romantic
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that tells its tale well
August 7th, 2026 19:59
sorenbarrett said:
A love poem that tells its tale well
August 7th, 2026 19:59
Candyland Of Delicious Desires. Part 1
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nerd, this is wildly sensual and delightfully shameless! The playful sweetness barely conceals how intensely erotic it becomes. One deliciously wicked poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:12
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Nerd, this is wildly sensual and delightfully shameless! The playful sweetness barely conceals how intensely erotic it becomes. One deliciously wicked poem, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 6th, 2026 08:12
Candyland Of Delicious Desires. Part 1
Fränz Müller said:
This poem is wonderful! Very well done. I eagerly await part two! ☺️
August 6th, 2026 07:08
Fränz Müller said:
This poem is wonderful! Very well done. I eagerly await part two! ☺️
August 6th, 2026 07:08
Candyland Of Delicious Desires. Part 1
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor used here. Well done
August 6th, 2026 03:25
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor used here. Well done
August 6th, 2026 03:25
Exploring my breasts and find hate
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “I envy your arousal when you see me bare” is the line that stayed with me. It captures such a painful divide between how one person is seen and how one sees oneself. That tension echoes through the entire piece. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:55
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, “I envy your arousal when you see me bare” is the line that stayed with me. It captures such a painful divide between how one person is seen and how one sees oneself. That tension echoes through the entire piece. Beautifully done. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 5th, 2026 22:55
Exploring my breasts and find hate
peto said:
You got the boys exited with this one nerd
Enjoying your poetry
August 5th, 2026 11:33
peto said:
You got the boys exited with this one nerd
Enjoying your poetry
August 5th, 2026 11:33
Exploring my breasts and find hate
Nerd said:
Thank you all for taking your time reading my poem.
I hope you all have a wonderful day.
August 5th, 2026 10:46
Nerd said:
Thank you all for taking your time reading my poem.
I hope you all have a wonderful day.
August 5th, 2026 10:46
Exploring my breasts and find hate
Fränz Müller said:
Very well said! Great poem!
August 5th, 2026 06:42
Fränz Müller said:
Very well said! Great poem!
August 5th, 2026 06:42
Exploring my breasts and find hate
Paul Bell said:
We all hate something about ourselves.
Guys like breasts, girls probably put up with them.
August 5th, 2026 05:39
Paul Bell said:
We all hate something about ourselves.
Guys like breasts, girls probably put up with them.
August 5th, 2026 05:39
Exploring my breasts and find hate
Syd said:
I\'ll be honest here...it was the title that drew me in, but I\'m glad it did.
A clever poem.
- Syd 🍄
August 5th, 2026 04:46
Syd said:
I\'ll be honest here...it was the title that drew me in, but I\'m glad it did.
A clever poem.
- Syd 🍄
August 5th, 2026 04:46
Exploring my breasts and find hate
sorenbarrett said:
When one is objectified and defined by one\'s external features one becomes nothing more that a pound of flesh in a butcher shop. Well written
August 5th, 2026 04:15
sorenbarrett said:
When one is objectified and defined by one\'s external features one becomes nothing more that a pound of flesh in a butcher shop. Well written
August 5th, 2026 04:15
A seasonal feeling
peto said:
Well written Nerd
Particularly liked the 1st and last lines
Keep em coming
August 4th, 2026 12:43
peto said:
Well written Nerd
Particularly liked the 1st and last lines
Keep em coming
August 4th, 2026 12:43
A seasonal feeling
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems surreal in its projection. it tells its tale in good rhyme
August 4th, 2026 03:21
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems surreal in its projection. it tells its tale in good rhyme
August 4th, 2026 03:21
What happened?
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem when memories are nightmares. Self esteem must be built not on the foundation of the past but the firm ground of the present. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:22
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem when memories are nightmares. Self esteem must be built not on the foundation of the past but the firm ground of the present. Well written
July 9th, 2026 13:22
What did I step into?
sorenbarrett said:
Manga of a sexualized nature can stimulate the steam and heat as well as the shower. How the perspective changes. Well done
July 8th, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
Manga of a sexualized nature can stimulate the steam and heat as well as the shower. How the perspective changes. Well done
July 8th, 2026 09:01
What did I step into?
Demar Desu said:
I shouldn’t be visualizing… sigh great poem nonetheless
July 8th, 2026 08:15
Demar Desu said:
I shouldn’t be visualizing… sigh great poem nonetheless
July 8th, 2026 08:15
I’m sorry
sorenbarrett said:
Short and yet reveling so much about the one speaking and society\'s demands. Well done
July 8th, 2026 03:27
sorenbarrett said:
Short and yet reveling so much about the one speaking and society\'s demands. Well done
July 8th, 2026 03:27
I’m sorry
Demar Desu said:
A true poet doesn’t eat when they’re hungry! Do be sure you’re hydrated though… great poem
July 7th, 2026 22:14
Demar Desu said:
A true poet doesn’t eat when they’re hungry! Do be sure you’re hydrated though… great poem
July 7th, 2026 22:14
A rush of a view
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem could be taken as sexual but regardless it feels
July 6th, 2026 12:30
sorenbarrett said:
Sensual this poem could be taken as sexual but regardless it feels
July 6th, 2026 12:30
Feelings start to fade
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad poem using metaphor well as a bridge between feeling and nature or reality of the external. In line eight you might choose to remove the first from in that it is used again a couple of words latter and this confuses the meaning. Or the line might be rewritten retaining the first from and removing the second. It is a well written piece that sends its meaning clearly and conveys a sense of sadness of not being noticed or cared about.
July 5th, 2026 05:17
sorenbarrett said:
It is a sad poem using metaphor well as a bridge between feeling and nature or reality of the external. In line eight you might choose to remove the first from in that it is used again a couple of words latter and this confuses the meaning. Or the line might be rewritten retaining the first from and removing the second. It is a well written piece that sends its meaning clearly and conveys a sense of sadness of not being noticed or cared about.
July 5th, 2026 05:17
Just me and you on Fourth of July
sorenbarrett said:
This poem combines the fireworks of holiday with sparks of passion. Nicely worded it is explicit in a sexual explosion.
July 4th, 2026 06:57
sorenbarrett said:
This poem combines the fireworks of holiday with sparks of passion. Nicely worded it is explicit in a sexual explosion.
July 4th, 2026 06:57
Flower Food
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling not acceptable and not worthy of being chosen even when one makes sacrifices. Well said
July 3rd, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A sad poem of feeling not acceptable and not worthy of being chosen even when one makes sacrifices. Well said
July 3rd, 2026 04:16
First Night
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its overt sexuality sends a message of one looking for acceptance and unity. Nicely worded
July 2nd, 2026 03:31
sorenbarrett said:
This poem in its overt sexuality sends a message of one looking for acceptance and unity. Nicely worded
July 2nd, 2026 03:31
What title do I give my face?
sorenbarrett said:
Why is it so hard to see oneself accurately? This a poem of poor self esteem that needs adjustment to reality
July 1st, 2026 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Why is it so hard to see oneself accurately? This a poem of poor self esteem that needs adjustment to reality
July 1st, 2026 11:31
Where can I buy sour cream?
lunarchloedip said:
now i want doritos and sour cream!!! thanks!!!!
June 30th, 2026 14:45
lunarchloedip said:
now i want doritos and sour cream!!! thanks!!!!
June 30th, 2026 14:45
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