Comments received on poems by Trinity duenas
in the shadows
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write of the diming of perception and the questioning of whether one has fulfilled their duty to fight for another. Well written
July 28th, 2026 04:58
sorenbarrett said:
A most lovely write of the diming of perception and the questioning of whether one has fulfilled their duty to fight for another. Well written
July 28th, 2026 04:58
Rising from the ashes
sorenbarrett said:
It is the cadence and rhythm with the rhyme that make this poem. The message beautiful and bright but the flow comes from the meter and rhyme. Well done and a fave
July 28th, 2026 04:09
sorenbarrett said:
It is the cadence and rhythm with the rhyme that make this poem. The message beautiful and bright but the flow comes from the meter and rhyme. Well done and a fave
July 28th, 2026 04:09
Endless
sorenbarrett said:
A love that has over time soured on one end remains on the other. There can not help but be a longing for reunion and a sad nostalgia. Well written
July 13th, 2026 04:16
sorenbarrett said:
A love that has over time soured on one end remains on the other. There can not help but be a longing for reunion and a sad nostalgia. Well written
July 13th, 2026 04:16
Untitled
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a person with resilience, perseverance, and determination. Well written
July 12th, 2026 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
A tribute to a person with resilience, perseverance, and determination. Well written
July 12th, 2026 09:08
Untitled
Paul Bell said:
The world would never have got conquered if we listened to the doubters, or the flat earth wallers.
July 12th, 2026 06:50
Paul Bell said:
The world would never have got conquered if we listened to the doubters, or the flat earth wallers.
July 12th, 2026 06:50
