Comments received on poems by 8Blackwidow8



Hush
Thomas W Case said:

The last line—“breeds secret tastes that should never be mentioned”—adds a quiet sense of taboo or hidden desire, leaving the reader with something unresolved and slightly haunting.

July 26th, 2026 08:12

Hush
sorenbarrett said:

Sensual and sexual. Nicely written

July 25th, 2026 14:35

Equalize
sorenbarrett said:

All would have to agree he was an outlaw labeled by Jews and Romans as such. There is no arguing with maggots in the grave they take what they want. A fun read

July 23rd, 2026 12:05

Extraction
sorenbarrett said:

Dark and horrific this poem leaves a trail of destruction. Well worded

July 22nd, 2026 12:55

Pages of Time
RSM0812 said:

Interesting rhyme scheme. Like a love letter gone wrong.

July 22nd, 2026 07:07

Pages of Time
Teddy.15 said:

I\'m 51 I\'m a woman and I\'ve been writing about my first love whome I met at the age of 17, for 20 years, along with my poems about marriage which of most are hilarious, my first love was a traumatic experience yet left me with a fabulous piece of experience and I never regret not look back with any wish that it wouldn\'t have ended because I am who I am today because of that chapter. ❤️

July 21st, 2026 12:10

Parking Lot
Teddy.15 said:

I\'m a huge fan of patsy cline and of this poetry it\'s stunning, my favourite poetry is on love and here I got so much emotion with beautifully crafted imagery. 🌹

July 21st, 2026 11:22

Pages of Time
sorenbarrett said:

How often we are not heard or understood. A most intriguing piece of communication where intent is often lost a fave

July 21st, 2026 10:24

Parking Lot
sorenbarrett said:

All it takes is a spark and the result a conflagration. Well done most romantic

July 20th, 2026 16:31