Comments received on poems by Faded Silhouette
The cowards prayer (Rough draft 1)
sorenbarrett said:
A most selfless prayer so nicely expressed in poetic form. A fave for both the message and the form and rhyme in so few words
July 31st, 2026 06:21
sorenbarrett said:
A most selfless prayer so nicely expressed in poetic form. A fave for both the message and the form and rhyme in so few words
July 31st, 2026 06:21
Human Hearts
Durdica Porobija said:
A very touching song, just like its theme about the inner state of the heart, which is already sensitive by itself. It touches on a universal truth about the human being.
July 30th, 2026 03:49
Durdica Porobija said:
A very touching song, just like its theme about the inner state of the heart, which is already sensitive by itself. It touches on a universal truth about the human being.
July 30th, 2026 03:49
Human Hearts
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor cleverly crafted in rhyme. Well done
July 29th, 2026 04:33
sorenbarrett said:
A great metaphor cleverly crafted in rhyme. Well done
July 29th, 2026 04:33
What The World Will Say About You
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting write that contains enough truth that gives one pause. Yet the influence seen and unseen on others will make a footprint and butterfly effect that will remain. Nicely written and a fave
July 28th, 2026 04:06
sorenbarrett said:
A haunting write that contains enough truth that gives one pause. Yet the influence seen and unseen on others will make a footprint and butterfly effect that will remain. Nicely written and a fave
July 28th, 2026 04:06
I am Empty
sorenbarrett said:
Such metaphoric meaning in this well worded poetic lesson a fave
July 26th, 2026 04:04
sorenbarrett said:
Such metaphoric meaning in this well worded poetic lesson a fave
July 26th, 2026 04:04
I am Empty
2781 said:
I heard that in Japan cracked vessels are seen as beautiful. To stop them leaking they fill the cracks with gold. You need proper wealth to apply the analogy to a soul.
July 26th, 2026 03:33
2781 said:
I heard that in Japan cracked vessels are seen as beautiful. To stop them leaking they fill the cracks with gold. You need proper wealth to apply the analogy to a soul.
July 26th, 2026 03:33
