Comments received on poems by turningpoint



halfway housepart 2two
sorenbarrett said:

A sad write about a sad place.

September 9th, 2026 19:09

public and private lives
sorenbarrett said:

A long time to spend in a halfway house and with a girl friend just a long time. Well said

September 8th, 2026 13:42

public and private lives
Jamiano said:

Thank you for sharing. Beautiful heartfelt poem.

September 8th, 2026 13:22

public and private lives
Paul Bell said:

I suppose we do spend most our lives in our houses, though I hate indoors.
You say you spent 40 years with your girlfriend everyday which either brings you closer or you need another room for your own space.

September 8th, 2026 13:18

communication usually wins
sorenbarrett said:

Nicely said a good write.

September 7th, 2026 15:52

contingency
sorenbarrett said:

I hear the recognition that life itself is full of contingencies. Well done

September 5th, 2026 20:58

TIME ON OUR HANDS
sorenbarrett said:

An informative poem both on the individual and the location well done

September 3rd, 2026 19:50

JEALOUSY
sorenbarrett said:

Vivid memories of nature\'s beauty. Nicely written

September 2nd, 2026 11:29

PERFECT LOVE
sorenbarrett said:

How time flies as we sit parked. A good read on aging and remaining fixed in one spot. Well done

September 1st, 2026 07:49

GOOD AND BAD LUCK
sorenbarrett said:

Such a message where one\'s own self feeling is their luck. Nicely done and it is felt as well

August 31st, 2026 15:05

LACK OF SLEEP AND ARTHRITUS
Doggerel Dave said:

Change your mind. Recovery takes some time, but the result is worthwhile.

August 29th, 2026 16:53

LACK OF SLEEP AND ARTHRITUS
Friendship said:

Sorry for your pain

August 29th, 2026 08:32

LACK OF SLEEP AND ARTHRITUS
sorenbarrett said:

Distraction one treatment for pain sometimes works. Better than nothing even if it is just a little bit. Well written

August 29th, 2026 03:43

SPIRITS IN A HALFWAY HOUSE
sorenbarrett said:

Good and bad in all things. A poem that represents mostly good. Nicely done

August 28th, 2026 16:54

crisis and relief
sorenbarrett said:

A lovely write of timing and taking appropriate actions to achieve our goals. Nicely written

August 27th, 2026 04:15

mind body and spirit
sorenbarrett said:

A most interesting comparison nicely presented.

August 24th, 2026 13:57

THE LUCKY AND UNLUCKY
sorenbarrett said:

With a little help from our friends that often serve as our ambulance we may not want it or like it but sometimes need it. Nicely done

August 21st, 2026 19:24

high and low life
sorenbarrett said:

I sense the rush and nostalgia for a slower pace in this poem. Well done

August 16th, 2026 15:05

past present the future
sorenbarrett said:

An interesting thought about how the future holds mental illness as its course

August 9th, 2026 19:29

what is the secret for a good life
sorenbarrett said:

Respect for others is read in this write. Many like similar things but there is no right or wrong in music, art or view of beauty. A lovely write

August 8th, 2026 15:42

where theres a will theres a way
turningpoint said:

thank you

August 7th, 2026 18:50

where theres a will theres a way
sorenbarrett said:

We have a bit of all in us. A poetic comparison of people to animals and well warranted as well

August 7th, 2026 18:35

POSITIVE ANXIETY
sorenbarrett said:

The little pleasures that make life worth living nicely outlined in this poem. Nicely done

August 7th, 2026 03:48

desperation
turningpoint said:

thank you very much i would like to read more of yours

August 4th, 2026 07:30

thoughts
sorenbarrett said:

This poem may be taken as a tender and loving view of love I take it as a comfortable one nothing spectacular just comfortable not heroic or fantasy but real.

August 4th, 2026 07:26

desperation
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that most can feel. It paints the day as a busy one and the night full of demons that throw fuel on the fire. Nicely written with great rhyme and good flow. Well done

August 3rd, 2026 11:04

halfway house
Friendship said:

well written

August 2nd, 2026 17:54

halfway house
sorenbarrett said:

This piece seems to be thoughts adrift musing on what could have or should have been but is not and how we fit in to a universe so vast. Well written

August 2nd, 2026 09:18

changing logic and enotion
sorenbarrett said:

The balance between the logical and emotional a fight we all have. Nicely done

August 1st, 2026 08:45

time
peto said:

Welcome
I\'ve always envied writers who can say so much with so few words
Looking forward to reading more from you

July 31st, 2026 12:13

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