Comments received on poems by graeme_macphee
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GRAEME - Thanks for an interesting first poem. At night my diffuse thoughts often coalesce into meaning (CONCATENATE). Solitude (in sleep) can appear to provide safety - but (in my case) dreams always intrude and disturb the solitude ! Thanks for the assurance that "we all dream !" A well penned "free verse poem" which pulsates with concepts and rhythms. BRIAN
May 14th, 2016 13:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GRAEME - Thanks for an interesting first poem. At night my diffuse thoughts often coalesce into meaning (CONCATENATE). Solitude (in sleep) can appear to provide safety - but (in my case) dreams always intrude and disturb the solitude ! Thanks for the assurance that "we all dream !" A well penned "free verse poem" which pulsates with concepts and rhythms. BRIAN
May 14th, 2016 13:37