Comments received on poems by thally mateu



A arte que se vende
sorenbarrett said:

This poem a metaphor itself speaks of not only writing but living of owning what one is not dreams of another manufactured by machine of man but from the heart. It is a plea for genuine being and not being afraid to be oneself. Lovely

September 15th, 2026 09:06

Texto Imundo de Capital
sorenbarrett said:

Nice quotes that seem proverbs well written

September 10th, 2026 18:15

imediatividade
sorenbarrett said:

Observation a powerful tool. Nicely written

September 5th, 2026 20:56

atendimento especial de carro
sorenbarrett said:

Smitten comes to mind. Infatuated is another word as well as taken and seduced. A poem of attraction, lust and owned. Nicer words of love at first sight and enthralled don\'t seem to fit. It is nature\'s magnetism and sexual drive, whether by pheromones or visual attributes or even tone of voice that calls. A wonderful write.

September 3rd, 2026 09:18

nostalgia de um futuro que ainda não passou.
sorenbarrett said:

There is a smothering to the end of this poem. All the while building up to it with feeling of uselessness and just awaiting death. It is nicely written

September 2nd, 2026 10:23