Comments received on poems by paulamcnealy



PLAYERS BE PLAYED
JustABird said:

I think your poem is hilarious. ;)

June 5th, 2016 01:27

PLAYERS BE PLAYED
paulamcnealy said:

Ok I edited it. Lol It was just suppose to be a funny poem. 😇

June 4th, 2016 06:23

PLAYERS BE PLAYED
lysistrata said:

My friend,

Where are your manners?All the Education was wasted on YOU!
Here is what I've written for IRVINE WELSH (google Him,if you don't know his majesty)

I know a "boxer"
with a head
like a bulb.
Next week
I'd crush Him
under my thumb.
One day he behaves
like terrible enfant,
the other wonders
like a spoiled slug.
Calm down lad!
You are just a rich prat.

(There could be a sequel....The rest en prive)😉

June 4th, 2016 05:34

PLAYERS BE PLAYED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

OOOOOOOOH PAULA - Awesome poem and picture. Love is often just a game - especially for Men - another notch on the bedpost. As you know I treat all Ladies with respect - you are all very precious ! Men are sensitive about size but there's nothing worn or forlorn under my kilt ! Thanks for sharing - Love BRIAN.

June 4th, 2016 03:44

Motivation
Berthold Lippel said:

I can see a new collection
Poems praising long erections
LOL

May 29th, 2016 13:18

Motivation
paulamcnealy said:

I said clearly it is song by Kelly Rowland. My understanding is that as long as you are not claiming it as your own then its ok. But if not it won't be the first time I've been a bad girl 😇

May 29th, 2016 08:10

Motivation
lysistrata said:

Paula,
Are you sure we could do 'this'?
What about Copyright Law?

May 29th, 2016 05:00

Motivation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW PAULA - Lovely lyrics - very exotic and explicit. Thanks for sharing ! Yours BRIAN

May 29th, 2016 03:47

You turned and walked away (Mom)
paulamcnealy said:

I have those as well. Poetry is like therapy. I'm actually a very happy person. Maybe because I'm single. lol I will share a happy or romantic poem maybe tomorrow. Thanks for your comment 😋

May 28th, 2016 20:18

You turned and walked away (Mom)
Berthold Lippel said:

Both of your poems brought me to the edge of tears. That means you write real, powerful poetry. But now--to equalize things--write one that shows your joy!

May 28th, 2016 19:28

SECRETS OF THE DARK & EVIL
paulamcnealy said:

Brian thank you. I have put it behind me. I realize it was never my fault. I have never blamed myself. One thing it taught me is to always respect myself and in that way I learn now that I am one of the very few. The only thing I struggled or struggle is the betrayal of my mothers love. Many ppl ask why I never told. Well being 7 & 8 years old and and a loaded gun at his side was all the intimidation I needed. And as you grow older the reason for keeping your secret changes. In high school I often thought if others knew my secrets they would feel I was tainted. Sometimes I feel the only ones that really know the truth is me and my mom and my EX step father But most importantly Is God knows the truth. I find great comfort in knowing that. Thank you Brian


May 28th, 2016 08:55

SECRETS OF THE DARK & EVIL
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HELLO PAULA - Thanks for caring and sharing. All children are vulnerable and personally I think male pedophiles should be castrated. Female pedophiles are much less common than male. What you experienced was very intense and (apparently) condoned by your Mother who ensured you were alone with your wicked Step-father. My experience in counselling those who have been molested as Children is "It takes the soul". Real love and TLC from those you love is cathartic but takes a miracle for your SOUL TO BE RESTORED. Thinking of you - praying for you BRIAN

May 28th, 2016 08:42

You turned and walked away (Mom)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME PAULA - For a very powerful and poignant first poem. - straight from your aching heart. Mothers are special and when they go (for whatever reason) it leaves an aching void in our heart - BRIAN

May 28th, 2016 03:17