Comments received on poems by Dog days
The Leaf
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem beautifully and succinctly captures autumn’s fleeting stillness, interrupted by the mundane rush of daily life.
November 1st, 2026 12:29
soheil khodaparasti said:
The poem beautifully and succinctly captures autumn’s fleeting stillness, interrupted by the mundane rush of daily life.
November 1st, 2026 12:29
The Bore
sorenbarrett said:
Fun and clever it takes what seems a non sequitur and turns it into a paradox that is resolved with a self revealing play on oneself. Nicely done.
November 1st, 2026 04:31
sorenbarrett said:
Fun and clever it takes what seems a non sequitur and turns it into a paradox that is resolved with a self revealing play on oneself. Nicely done.
November 1st, 2026 04:31
The Bore
Gelyn said:
I like the humor in a small package and very intriguing...
Gel
November 1st, 2026 01:51
Gelyn said:
I like the humor in a small package and very intriguing...
Gel
November 1st, 2026 01:51
The Leaf
sorenbarrett said:
This a short poem of impactful images creating a sensation. Well done
October 31st, 2026 04:00
sorenbarrett said:
This a short poem of impactful images creating a sensation. Well done
October 31st, 2026 04:00
Women
sorenbarrett said:
One has to ask if it is the short or long fuse. There is a feel of inevitability in this poem only a matter of time. Well said
October 30th, 2026 12:40
sorenbarrett said:
One has to ask if it is the short or long fuse. There is a feel of inevitability in this poem only a matter of time. Well said
October 30th, 2026 12:40
The Orange Tragedy
sorenbarrett said:
That perfect timing where sweetness is at its max before it sours. Nicely pictured here.
October 29th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
That perfect timing where sweetness is at its max before it sours. Nicely pictured here.
October 29th, 2026 09:03
Mementos
sorenbarrett said:
Short and most descriptive leaving the reader wondering about the choice of yellow is it age or lack of courage. Nicely written
October 28th, 2026 04:19
sorenbarrett said:
Short and most descriptive leaving the reader wondering about the choice of yellow is it age or lack of courage. Nicely written
October 28th, 2026 04:19
The Socks
sorenbarrett said:
Simple as poetry should be, with few words again a poetic condensation and with deeper meaning of something that seems so clear and concise. Nicely done
October 27th, 2026 04:26
sorenbarrett said:
Simple as poetry should be, with few words again a poetic condensation and with deeper meaning of something that seems so clear and concise. Nicely done
October 27th, 2026 04:26
The Scene at Dawn
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems avant-guard and I like it. It casts an image that has a feel to it. If one takes it metaphorically it seems a sign of odd friendship that is a bit awkward but sharing in nature. Well done.
October 26th, 2026 04:08
sorenbarrett said:
This poem seems avant-guard and I like it. It casts an image that has a feel to it. If one takes it metaphorically it seems a sign of odd friendship that is a bit awkward but sharing in nature. Well done.
October 26th, 2026 04:08
The One to Bloom
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves many thoughts that could go different ways. Nicely written.
October 25th, 2026 11:07
sorenbarrett said:
This leaves many thoughts that could go different ways. Nicely written.
October 25th, 2026 11:07
The One to Bloom
Dog days said:
Translation
In the journey of life,
On the occasion of some celebration today,
I met them once again.
And yet another time,
I failed to express—
This little, simple thought
Nurtured and blossomed in the courtyard of my heart.
October 25th, 2026 08:49
Dog days said:
Translation
In the journey of life,
On the occasion of some celebration today,
I met them once again.
And yet another time,
I failed to express—
This little, simple thought
Nurtured and blossomed in the courtyard of my heart.
October 25th, 2026 08:49
The Excuses
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well written with rhyme this poem speaks of the excuses we all have to invent to avoid undesirable events and people. Well done
October 24th, 2026 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
Clever and well written with rhyme this poem speaks of the excuses we all have to invent to avoid undesirable events and people. Well done
October 24th, 2026 08:24
The Acknowledgments
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gratitude and expression of thanks nicely penned
October 23rd, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic gratitude and expression of thanks nicely penned
October 23rd, 2026 04:20
The Bouquet of Red
sorenbarrett said:
I love the dark humor in this one all set to good rhyme and carried out in a minimum of words. A fave
October 22nd, 2026 09:37
sorenbarrett said:
I love the dark humor in this one all set to good rhyme and carried out in a minimum of words. A fave
October 22nd, 2026 09:37
A Small Advice to Go By
Poet\'s Dream said:
I found it kinda funny, though the poem has deeper layers to it than just amusement. I liked it, good poem.
October 21st, 2026 16:37
Poet\'s Dream said:
I found it kinda funny, though the poem has deeper layers to it than just amusement. I liked it, good poem.
October 21st, 2026 16:37
A Small Advice to Go By
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes feelings of a parents advice to an adolescent that has just gained their driver\'s license but well may be metaphoric about any venture. Nicely written
October 21st, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
This poem evokes feelings of a parents advice to an adolescent that has just gained their driver\'s license but well may be metaphoric about any venture. Nicely written
October 21st, 2026 03:58
The Bot
sorenbarrett said:
The intent seems to be not mechanical but tactical. Nicely done
October 21st, 2026 03:28
sorenbarrett said:
The intent seems to be not mechanical but tactical. Nicely done
October 21st, 2026 03:28
The Scrap Paper
sorenbarrett said:
I love this mythical creation that makes more sense than the alternate version. A fun read and well set.
October 19th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
I love this mythical creation that makes more sense than the alternate version. A fun read and well set.
October 19th, 2026 04:14
How to Compose a Better Poem
sorenbarrett said:
Now that would stand out. A fun read that is in metaphor instructive. Well done
October 18th, 2026 04:34
sorenbarrett said:
Now that would stand out. A fun read that is in metaphor instructive. Well done
October 18th, 2026 04:34
The Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
From person to foul to person again the back and forth of thought. Nicely done so well imaged
October 17th, 2026 05:46
sorenbarrett said:
From person to foul to person again the back and forth of thought. Nicely done so well imaged
October 17th, 2026 05:46
The Apple
sorenbarrett said:
I was following fine until I reached the campfire wood. At that point I felt that I had been snaped out of a dream of the classroom into the reality of the camp where the students disappeared and no one was a bout to ask for a piece of the apple brought for the teacher or one that is real at the camp. A mind bending poem. Clever enough and well presented a fave
October 16th, 2026 03:58
sorenbarrett said:
I was following fine until I reached the campfire wood. At that point I felt that I had been snaped out of a dream of the classroom into the reality of the camp where the students disappeared and no one was a bout to ask for a piece of the apple brought for the teacher or one that is real at the camp. A mind bending poem. Clever enough and well presented a fave
October 16th, 2026 03:58
The Tab
sorenbarrett said:
A great short with a message. Hopefully we our deaths and lives are not measured by monetary value
October 15th, 2026 04:32
sorenbarrett said:
A great short with a message. Hopefully we our deaths and lives are not measured by monetary value
October 15th, 2026 04:32
The earphones
sorenbarrett said:
This one had me thinking, but my thoughts are too slow. Well written
October 14th, 2026 04:20
sorenbarrett said:
This one had me thinking, but my thoughts are too slow. Well written
October 14th, 2026 04:20
The Coffee Stain
sorenbarrett said:
Now that short statement gives one something to think of. Well done
October 13th, 2026 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
Now that short statement gives one something to think of. Well done
October 13th, 2026 04:29
The paper boat
sorenbarrett said:
There is such deep meaning in so few words. To start with a paper boat on a sea such a comparison as vast as the sea yet as insignificant as a paper boat. Power and weakness, eternal and so short lived, vast and finite, water and wood, womb of life and birth now reincarnate man\'s creation. Beware such simple and to the eye plane writes for they contain deep wisdom it is upon simplicity that complexity emerges. From simple atoms diamonds are made. A fave
October 13th, 2026 04:14
sorenbarrett said:
There is such deep meaning in so few words. To start with a paper boat on a sea such a comparison as vast as the sea yet as insignificant as a paper boat. Power and weakness, eternal and so short lived, vast and finite, water and wood, womb of life and birth now reincarnate man\'s creation. Beware such simple and to the eye plane writes for they contain deep wisdom it is upon simplicity that complexity emerges. From simple atoms diamonds are made. A fave
October 13th, 2026 04:14
The paper boat
Dog days said:
A paper boat
That the ocean sank
Anyway-
Who is keeping scores of that
October 12th, 2026 23:31
Dog days said:
A paper boat
That the ocean sank
Anyway-
Who is keeping scores of that
October 12th, 2026 23:31
The same old lanes
sorenbarrett said:
A good analogy it becomes almost a metaphor. We seem trapped in a matrix where we wander. Nicely framed
October 12th, 2026 03:45
sorenbarrett said:
A good analogy it becomes almost a metaphor. We seem trapped in a matrix where we wander. Nicely framed
October 12th, 2026 03:45
The same old lanes
Dog days said:
When I step outside to take a breath—
I realise,
how far this world has come,
while we remained there, still wandering through those same old streets.
October 11th, 2026 23:23
Dog days said:
When I step outside to take a breath—
I realise,
how far this world has come,
while we remained there, still wandering through those same old streets.
October 11th, 2026 23:23
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