Comments received on poems by ola89



Rita on a Lilly pad
lysistrata said:

Get Rita an iPhone!
Are we going to get "Rita: No Sex in the City?"

May 31st, 2016 10:43

Rita on a Lilly pad
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Oooooooh - OLA - Thanks for another poem ! It's both funny and sad at the same time ! I love pictures of froggies on Lilly pads they always look so so bemused. That is the essence of you poem. You are stuck between a Want and a Have-not ! Bad Rita - it is crazy that a lovely lady like you should be stagnated in love ! Thinking of you - Your Friend - BRIAN

May 31st, 2016 08:14

Rita Rejected
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME OLA - Thanks for an awesome first poem straight from your wounded heart. I love the structure of the poem throbbing with rhythm and creating awesome shapes. The centre button on this site allows us to create shapes (see my poems !) The content is very true to life but you underestimate GOD ! He always hears our prayers and pleas and heals us even when it's our OWN FAULT ! The second thing is God made you (from your Parents DNA) just the way you are - you are lovely. SO enjoy yourself - value yourself and be worthy of anything and anyone ! Welcome to MPS - BRIAN

May 30th, 2016 08:18