Comments received on poems by HylianLoftwing



Wallow in Sorrow
lysistrata said:

Mental Silence is worse than Death.
Only a corpse does not feel bitterness.
I want you to 'show' me with your verse what has made you so pessimistic.
And we love your avatar.🐤🐦

June 25th, 2016 13:16

Wallow in Sorrow
lysistrata said:

Instead of fading away,why don't you simply stay awake?
And embrace the friendly universe?!

June 25th, 2016 09:50

Lost Destination
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

CARPE PARDISIUM - Seize the Paradise. ! Thanks for sharing HYLIAN - A BEAUTIFUL free verse poem throbbing with rhythm and encouragement ! Even at 33 (Men never grow up !) I am still following dreams - crying - trying - reaching out - steeling - running and never losing sight of my paradise. You are an excellent poet - more please - your poems are an encouragement. Yours BRIAN

June 3rd, 2016 14:06

Satisfying Darkness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME HYLIAN - Thanks for a very powerful first poem straight from your own inner mind. "Personal Experience" poems are very challenging. The "free verse" structure and style (one continuous stanza) of the poem is perfect for the subject because it pours in a steady flow from your mind. I am sure you found it cathartic ! Thanks for having the courage to share - BRIAN

June 3rd, 2016 03:50