Comments received on poems by jobrand
Escaping The greatest catch 22
lysistrata said:
Jo,
The Title is ESCAPE...? Fix it.
Along with the category which is spiritual and a better editing of your poem...
My comment is that Anything worth dying for....is certainly worth living for....is even more certainly worth writing about... Right?
So Keep writing...
June 6th, 2016 09:29
lysistrata said:
Jo,
The Title is ESCAPE...? Fix it.
Along with the category which is spiritual and a better editing of your poem...
My comment is that Anything worth dying for....is certainly worth living for....is even more certainly worth writing about... Right?
So Keep writing...
June 6th, 2016 09:29
Escaping The greatest catch 22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JO - Thanks for a great first poem awash with rhyme & rhythm and despair - BUT - in the end HOPE. "God love us so so much - that he sent JESUS to die for our sins and give us Eternal Life in Heaven - AMEN" Yours BRIAN
June 6th, 2016 07:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JO - Thanks for a great first poem awash with rhyme & rhythm and despair - BUT - in the end HOPE. "God love us so so much - that he sent JESUS to die for our sins and give us Eternal Life in Heaven - AMEN" Yours BRIAN
June 6th, 2016 07:48
