Music box
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GREAT FIRST POEM SHIRO - Thanks for sharing. Love the structure - rhythmic lines which give the poem flow. It is like a SENRYU (5 7 5 syllables on human topic) in as much as it speaks of Man - whose days are numbered and compares his life span with a music box (which if powered) could play for ever. Like a SENRYU it embodies truth and wisdom. BRIAN

June 7th, 2016 18:29