The Eye Of The Storm
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME CHARL - Thanks for an excellent first poem from your own experience. Love the structure 3 balanced quatrains each with 2 rhyming doubles. The poem has excellent Rhyme & Rhythm. What you describe resonates with the experiences of friends of mine.! Misty clouds - rainy days - depressive beast. Always dark & miserable alone and trapped inside. I love the optimism in the last stanza ! Brighter days - calming storms - no potetial shipwrecks .......... ONE DAY TO PREVAIL ! Thanks for sharing - BRIAN

June 8th, 2016 15:40