Forsaken
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND - Thanks for sharing a great first poem on a subject (FORSAKEN) some of us have experienced ! Your poem in well structures and pulsates with rhyme and rhythm which is an important criteria of a good poem. The content is excellent full of the imagery and experience of being FORSAKEN. The final line sums up the experience "Forsaken by ALL of society I gather" - frightening ! Yours BRIAN

June 10th, 2016 04:07