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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME GERTIE - THANKS FOR AN INTRIGUING FIRST POEM. Self analysis is important ! In your opening section - I am Nothing ~ I am Blank - you sound like MISTER CELLOPHANE who everyone looks straight through ! I the closing section you exhort us to be a canvas for "A Beautiful Picture" and (I lke this) if no one else will piant it "Paint it yourself" - self esteem & self respect. A poem of two halves - I love it more please ! Yours BRIAN.

June 13th, 2016 05:19