Comments received on poems by marissaapril
\"Evolving Emotions\"
John Lee said:
There is poetry in everyone's past and pain.. you can write it well from yours. Great poem
June 21st, 2016 23:52
John Lee said:
There is poetry in everyone's past and pain.. you can write it well from yours. Great poem
June 21st, 2016 23:52
\"Five Accidents Later\"
John Lee said:
Heartbreakingly great poem! I can feel the emotions, the sadness in you for your sister and her pain.
June 21st, 2016 23:45
John Lee said:
Heartbreakingly great poem! I can feel the emotions, the sadness in you for your sister and her pain.
June 21st, 2016 23:45
\"Let It Play\"
John Lee said:
I stopped dancing to my crackle. I just stand and stare at my record player because I'm tired of kicking it.. it won't stop playing! Great poem. It creates good imagery
June 21st, 2016 23:38
John Lee said:
I stopped dancing to my crackle. I just stand and stare at my record player because I'm tired of kicking it.. it won't stop playing! Great poem. It creates good imagery
June 21st, 2016 23:38
\" I Knew You Couldn\'t Love Me Darling, No One Can\"
John Lee said:
Wow.. very well written and a powerful truth that can relate to many.. i know I can relate.
June 20th, 2016 21:33
John Lee said:
Wow.. very well written and a powerful truth that can relate to many.. i know I can relate.
June 20th, 2016 21:33
\"Emergency\"
John Lee said:
Great poem, I've been at the breaking point myself it shows in my poetry as well.. thank you for sharing. You may have inspired me to write one on suicide. I'll mention you if I do.
June 20th, 2016 21:28
John Lee said:
Great poem, I've been at the breaking point myself it shows in my poetry as well.. thank you for sharing. You may have inspired me to write one on suicide. I'll mention you if I do.
June 20th, 2016 21:28
\"Evolving Emotions\"
IAmJaz said:
as cliché as this sounds, this poem is deep. I totally connected with the pain implied throughout your poem. Allow your past to motivate you to have a better life than what you've already experienced. Much love -jaz. 💘
June 18th, 2016 22:23
IAmJaz said:
as cliché as this sounds, this poem is deep. I totally connected with the pain implied throughout your poem. Allow your past to motivate you to have a better life than what you've already experienced. Much love -jaz. 💘
June 18th, 2016 22:23
\" I Knew You Couldn\'t Love Me Darling, No One Can\"
Tropicana said:
omg. The title instantly drew me in as it sounded so relatable. every single word down to the full stop was powerful, I wanted there to be more. thank you for writing this.
June 16th, 2016 15:48
Tropicana said:
omg. The title instantly drew me in as it sounded so relatable. every single word down to the full stop was powerful, I wanted there to be more. thank you for writing this.
June 16th, 2016 15:48
\" I Knew You Couldn\'t Love Me Darling, No One Can\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooooh MARISSA - Is this a confession or a "cri de coeur" or both. Chagrin d'Amour (The Pain of Love) is (in my experience too) very hard to bear. BUT while our hearts still flutter there is still the promise of love. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
June 15th, 2016 10:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Oooooooh MARISSA - Is this a confession or a "cri de coeur" or both. Chagrin d'Amour (The Pain of Love) is (in my experience too) very hard to bear. BUT while our hearts still flutter there is still the promise of love. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
June 15th, 2016 10:00
\"Let It Play\"
CarolRivers said:
This is such a beautiful poem with an amazing message. "listening to the echo of a hollow heart." I love it!
June 14th, 2016 18:05
CarolRivers said:
This is such a beautiful poem with an amazing message. "listening to the echo of a hollow heart." I love it!
June 14th, 2016 18:05
\"Let It Play\"
lysistrata said:
"I think it's time we created new sounds"
Very nicely done Marisa.
I am certain it's time you write more poems...
June 14th, 2016 08:32
lysistrata said:
"I think it's time we created new sounds"
Very nicely done Marisa.
I am certain it's time you write more poems...
June 14th, 2016 08:32
\"Let It Play\"
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARISSA - Thanks for posting such a haunting first poem ! Like an old scratched 78 it crackles with the passage of time but in the last line it encourages us to create new sounds ! I'm 33 so i'm old enough to have seen and heard 78's at my Grannies and also old enough to have gathered a few cracks and scratches ! I love the message of the poem that the mistakes of the past can too easily define us - we can all be "digitally remastered" eliminate the "damage" and be reborn (rereleased !) as something new and beautiful ! I'm only a third of the way through my life (33) but you elegant poem and your comment has given me a new horizon ! Thanks for caring - Yours BRIAN
June 14th, 2016 03:16
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MARISSA - Thanks for posting such a haunting first poem ! Like an old scratched 78 it crackles with the passage of time but in the last line it encourages us to create new sounds ! I'm 33 so i'm old enough to have seen and heard 78's at my Grannies and also old enough to have gathered a few cracks and scratches ! I love the message of the poem that the mistakes of the past can too easily define us - we can all be "digitally remastered" eliminate the "damage" and be reborn (rereleased !) as something new and beautiful ! I'm only a third of the way through my life (33) but you elegant poem and your comment has given me a new horizon ! Thanks for caring - Yours BRIAN
June 14th, 2016 03:16
