Comments received on poems by MoonJem1989
Inner Demon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"I hope you enjoy this poem" Ohhhhh JESS this is a great poem full of passion and heartbreak and skillfully written - BUT - Because of the content so so sad and NOT enjoyable ~ I'm crying already ! Yes JESS we do all have demons and the problem is they are inside us ~ so they go with us wherever and whenever we go Demons of lost love are the worst. A lovely lady like you should be able to free herself and overcome ! Love you ending and it did give me some hope and dry my tears ! "As a tree I shall rise and overcome ~ Slow to satrt but growing each day ~ Reaching the sky soon enough ~ Able to see that it was the very "demon" I needed !" Poems are always cathartic and (in time) demons can be too. Thanks for sharing - Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN
June 15th, 2016 09:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
"I hope you enjoy this poem" Ohhhhh JESS this is a great poem full of passion and heartbreak and skillfully written - BUT - Because of the content so so sad and NOT enjoyable ~ I'm crying already ! Yes JESS we do all have demons and the problem is they are inside us ~ so they go with us wherever and whenever we go Demons of lost love are the worst. A lovely lady like you should be able to free herself and overcome ! Love you ending and it did give me some hope and dry my tears ! "As a tree I shall rise and overcome ~ Slow to satrt but growing each day ~ Reaching the sky soon enough ~ Able to see that it was the very "demon" I needed !" Poems are always cathartic and (in time) demons can be too. Thanks for sharing - Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN
June 15th, 2016 09:06
Clarity
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JESS - Awesome first poem pulsating with rhyme and rhythm and hurt and happiness. YES Poetry is personal and also very cathartic and chance to eliminate the negative and accentuate the positive ! Thanks for your comment it always helps to interpret the nuances in a poem ! Every Blessing - Yours BRIAN (UK ~ 33)
June 14th, 2016 06:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JESS - Awesome first poem pulsating with rhyme and rhythm and hurt and happiness. YES Poetry is personal and also very cathartic and chance to eliminate the negative and accentuate the positive ! Thanks for your comment it always helps to interpret the nuances in a poem ! Every Blessing - Yours BRIAN (UK ~ 33)
June 14th, 2016 06:09
