Comments received on poems by amosj
A confirmation of sadness.
lysistrata said:
"A helping hand would be nice with some of this pressure, full steam ahead is the antidote of measure."
I hope your wish would become reality and your reality would look like a dream.
Oh,my body is exhausted,too but my spirit runs wild🏃🏃🏃🏃
Go on write something optimistic.... Take care.
June 26th, 2016 16:52
lysistrata said:
"A helping hand would be nice with some of this pressure, full steam ahead is the antidote of measure."
I hope your wish would become reality and your reality would look like a dream.
Oh,my body is exhausted,too but my spirit runs wild🏃🏃🏃🏃
Go on write something optimistic.... Take care.
June 26th, 2016 16:52
A confirmation of sadness.
camille said:
You brought the words to life for me ..a great work .
June 26th, 2016 16:29
camille said:
You brought the words to life for me ..a great work .
June 26th, 2016 16:29
A memory of discomfort
lysistrata said:
Your recollection and reflection on depression
left me a very good impression...
Is it too good to be true?!
I am looking forward to the next one....
June 14th, 2016 15:00
lysistrata said:
Your recollection and reflection on depression
left me a very good impression...
Is it too good to be true?!
I am looking forward to the next one....
June 14th, 2016 15:00
A memory of discomfort
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AMOS - Thanks for an interesting first poem with lots of rhythm and rhyme and challenging recollections. Its surprising how our memories accentuate the negative and all but obliterate the positive ~ it happens to all of us ! Caring is rare - BUT - Our brains can be galvanised - our senses can be reborn and our body revised - enabling us to positively engage in ventures new ! Nice ending - thanks for sharing - BRIAN
June 14th, 2016 14:12
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME AMOS - Thanks for an interesting first poem with lots of rhythm and rhyme and challenging recollections. Its surprising how our memories accentuate the negative and all but obliterate the positive ~ it happens to all of us ! Caring is rare - BUT - Our brains can be galvanised - our senses can be reborn and our body revised - enabling us to positively engage in ventures new ! Nice ending - thanks for sharing - BRIAN
June 14th, 2016 14:12
