Comments received on poems by lifzmuzic
Fly away with me
IAmJaz said:
I really love this lol. I hope you find your freedom at some point in your life. Much love - jaz 💘
June 18th, 2016 22:28
IAmJaz said:
I really love this lol. I hope you find your freedom at some point in your life. Much love - jaz 💘
June 18th, 2016 22:28
Fly away with me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVELY INVITATION LM ! Love the last four lines ! Soar........ Feel joy ........ Sing ~ and let us be free ! BUT I so love Chicago ~ where were you thinking of fleeing to ? Thanks for caring BRIAN
June 17th, 2016 10:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
LOVELY INVITATION LM ! Love the last four lines ! Soar........ Feel joy ........ Sing ~ and let us be free ! BUT I so love Chicago ~ where were you thinking of fleeing to ? Thanks for caring BRIAN
June 17th, 2016 10:58
Simple words
Tropicana said:
This is sweet! I like the way you added the picture and how the poems and font is also quite simple to keep to your theme!
June 16th, 2016 15:39
Tropicana said:
This is sweet! I like the way you added the picture and how the poems and font is also quite simple to keep to your theme!
June 16th, 2016 15:39
Simple words
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Friend ~ for a challenging second poem. In essence POETRY is simple and complicted at the same time. It is ~as you say ~ an expression of our deepest feelings and also our dreams. I love the definition of "Modern Poetry". Emotions expressed using any WORDS penned in ANY ORDER without the intrusion of rhyme ~ rhythm ~ spelling or grammar. The ultimate is a poem titled ANARCHY which is WORDLESS ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
June 16th, 2016 05:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Friend ~ for a challenging second poem. In essence POETRY is simple and complicted at the same time. It is ~as you say ~ an expression of our deepest feelings and also our dreams. I love the definition of "Modern Poetry". Emotions expressed using any WORDS penned in ANY ORDER without the intrusion of rhyme ~ rhythm ~ spelling or grammar. The ultimate is a poem titled ANARCHY which is WORDLESS ! Thanks for sharing BRIAN
June 16th, 2016 05:43
Geek in me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LM - Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent pulsating with rhyme and rhythm a structure very appropriate to the topic ! I'm a SCIENTIST so i guess i'm a GEEK too ! And - like you - I love SF and Fantasy and especially fantasy paintings which often stir my muse. Thanks - Yours BRIAN
June 15th, 2016 17:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME LM - Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent pulsating with rhyme and rhythm a structure very appropriate to the topic ! I'm a SCIENTIST so i guess i'm a GEEK too ! And - like you - I love SF and Fantasy and especially fantasy paintings which often stir my muse. Thanks - Yours BRIAN
June 15th, 2016 17:11
