Remember when
John Lee said:

First of all.. great poem, and great comment Brian.. danwood as far as writing to get your feelings out.. perfect way to deal! I do the same. Pain, hurt, sorrow, thoughts and regrets deal better written down than keeping in our heads.

June 20th, 2016 21:16

Remember when
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DAN ~ Thanks for an awesome first poem ~ more please. Love the style of this poem ~ having each line start with REMEMBER WHEN reinforces the message. You sure REMEMBER and you want us to REMEMBER as well ! I'm 33 (and still single) so i can empathise. Your first - octet -remembers when "It was perfect". The second - sextet - remembers when "It all went wrong". I love the pathos in the fifteenth line "Remember when we were perfect". Thanks for carin' an' sharin' Yours BRIAN

June 16th, 2016 04:11