Comments received on poems by OliveSee
On Call
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI OLIVE ~ EMAILS ~ Extraordinary ~ Modern ~ Amazing ~ Ignorant ~ Lunatic ~ Slavishness. Yes indeed "In a day dream eight to four daily ! Thanks BRIAN
July 11th, 2016 13:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI OLIVE ~ EMAILS ~ Extraordinary ~ Modern ~ Amazing ~ Ignorant ~ Lunatic ~ Slavishness. Yes indeed "In a day dream eight to four daily ! Thanks BRIAN
July 11th, 2016 13:51
Work 1
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OLIVE - Thanks for a great first poem on the subject of WORK ! Love the structure of your poem ~ pulsating with rhyme and rhythm ~ sounded (when read loud) like a manual typewriter ~ workin' 9 to 5 ! My ploy at work is too always "look" busy 9 t0 5 especially if they have CCTV ~ Big Brother is always watching you these days. Thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ~ Yours BRIAN
June 17th, 2016 15:35
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME OLIVE - Thanks for a great first poem on the subject of WORK ! Love the structure of your poem ~ pulsating with rhyme and rhythm ~ sounded (when read loud) like a manual typewriter ~ workin' 9 to 5 ! My ploy at work is too always "look" busy 9 t0 5 especially if they have CCTV ~ Big Brother is always watching you these days. Thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ~ Yours BRIAN
June 17th, 2016 15:35
