My hero doesn\'t wear a cape
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME LOUISA ~ A great first poem ~ Kitchen Sink dramas are always the best ! I can empathise because I too love to wash but hate to dry ! I have my own bachelor flat but I always go to my Mum's for Sunday lunch and always wash up for her ! Full marks to your BF ! Love the structure of the poem ! Five neat quatrains and rhyming couplets. The form ameliorates the subject. Thanks for sharing - BRIAN

June 23rd, 2016 17:30