Comments received on poems by AwkwardDebaterGirl
You Promised Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ADG ~ Thanks for another very elegant poem. All Men are good at making promises only a few (like me !) actually fulfil them ! Love the structure of your poem neat triplets each one heralding a new promise ! Love ~ Future ~ Truth ~ the End ~ and finally love again. Your final line is very cutting "Love means nothing to someone who lies to themselves" OUCH ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 25th, 2016 09:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ADG ~ Thanks for another very elegant poem. All Men are good at making promises only a few (like me !) actually fulfil them ! Love the structure of your poem neat triplets each one heralding a new promise ! Love ~ Future ~ Truth ~ the End ~ and finally love again. Your final line is very cutting "Love means nothing to someone who lies to themselves" OUCH ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 25th, 2016 09:03
Maybe We Weren\'t
Izzi Lynn said:
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!! I absolutely adore this poem. The purpose of a poem is to make the reader feel somethig, and I am nearly in tears right now. You really struck me in the feels here. I can't even pick out my favorite line, I love it all.
June 24th, 2016 16:16
Izzi Lynn said:
THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL!! I absolutely adore this poem. The purpose of a poem is to make the reader feel somethig, and I am nearly in tears right now. You really struck me in the feels here. I can't even pick out my favorite line, I love it all.
June 24th, 2016 16:16
Maybe We Weren\'t
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADG ~ Thanks for an awesome first poem and a PANTOUM form (lots of repetition) as well ~ we don't see many of those on MPS. Love the form (ideal for a "love poem") and the content. I'm 33 and single ~ and I can assure you it does happen ! Right Lady ~ wrong time ! Right time ~ wrong Lady ~ I could write a book on the one's that got away ! More poems please thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 24th, 2016 15:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ADG ~ Thanks for an awesome first poem and a PANTOUM form (lots of repetition) as well ~ we don't see many of those on MPS. Love the form (ideal for a "love poem") and the content. I'm 33 and single ~ and I can assure you it does happen ! Right Lady ~ wrong time ! Right time ~ wrong Lady ~ I could write a book on the one's that got away ! More poems please thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
June 24th, 2016 15:32
Maybe We Weren\'t
Tropicana said:
i loved the way you repeated sentences to add my emphasise "time passes whether you want it to or not" my favourite line
June 24th, 2016 12:52
Tropicana said:
i loved the way you repeated sentences to add my emphasise "time passes whether you want it to or not" my favourite line
June 24th, 2016 12:52
