Comments received on poems by Sai
Writers Block
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SAI ~ Love your first poem ! Love the structure ~ rhyming couplets (my fave !) and lots of rhythm (great to recite) and written in one frenetic stanza ! Answering (the door) googling ~ baking ~ paying the cleaner (£40 ~ big spender !) and then getting ready to go out ! Sometimes life is a wet sock ~ love your choice of words ~ more poems please ! Lovely to get a "fun poem" so much melancholy lately. Lost twice in Europe and our PM and Manager ~ at least Murray is through his first round @ Wimbledon ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK 33).
June 28th, 2016 10:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SAI ~ Love your first poem ! Love the structure ~ rhyming couplets (my fave !) and lots of rhythm (great to recite) and written in one frenetic stanza ! Answering (the door) googling ~ baking ~ paying the cleaner (£40 ~ big spender !) and then getting ready to go out ! Sometimes life is a wet sock ~ love your choice of words ~ more poems please ! Lovely to get a "fun poem" so much melancholy lately. Lost twice in Europe and our PM and Manager ~ at least Murray is through his first round @ Wimbledon ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK 33).
June 28th, 2016 10:19
Writers Block
lysistrata said:
You know what happens to people who stay in the middle of the road?
They RANDOM get run over!
I like to be random ALL the Time... Keep writing,😯😕
I do not suffer from reader's Block.😃😁
June 28th, 2016 08:16
lysistrata said:
You know what happens to people who stay in the middle of the road?
They RANDOM get run over!
I like to be random ALL the Time... Keep writing,😯😕
I do not suffer from reader's Block.😃😁
June 28th, 2016 08:16
