Breathe
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DLR ~ Thanks for a very challenging first poem ! Happiness ~ Trust ~ Love these are the thing we crave ~ especially when we are young! Love your antidote "Take a Shower" (preferably a cold one) "Breath baby girl". In my experience "deep breaths" can dry a lot of tears ! I share the optimism in your final stanza and it is reflected in my "Poem for Today" "Wake up & Shake up". Everything happens for a reason ~ There are so many things to be happy about ~ So breath baby girl ~ everything will be okay ! Thanks for carin' an' sharin' Yours BRIAN

July 2nd, 2016 04:43