Comments received on poems by Joana_zS
So long..
Dee said:
Hi Joana...Such an emotional and heart felt poem..Had me on the brink of tears.. When the respect for the other dies in a relationship, no matter how many times they profess to love you, for me it would be the end.. ' I love you ' three words so often bandied around without much thought . One would have to prove their love for me and respect comes top of my list.. I hope this work is nothing more than an emotional pouring from your poetic mind and not a true happening in your life my friend.......Best of wishes to you Joana.........Dee
July 2nd, 2016 08:54
Dee said:
Hi Joana...Such an emotional and heart felt poem..Had me on the brink of tears.. When the respect for the other dies in a relationship, no matter how many times they profess to love you, for me it would be the end.. ' I love you ' three words so often bandied around without much thought . One would have to prove their love for me and respect comes top of my list.. I hope this work is nothing more than an emotional pouring from your poetic mind and not a true happening in your life my friend.......Best of wishes to you Joana.........Dee
July 2nd, 2016 08:54
So long..
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JOANA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Nice structure bristling with rhyme and rhythm but a poignant content. To go or not to go ? ~ that is the question that haunts us through life in our many relationships. Some seem to strike lucky first time while "true love" avoids others. Personally ~ when I find the joy has gone out of a relationship ~ that is the time to move on. Thanks for sharing ~ best wishes ~ Yours BRIAN
July 2nd, 2016 08:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JOANA ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Nice structure bristling with rhyme and rhythm but a poignant content. To go or not to go ? ~ that is the question that haunts us through life in our many relationships. Some seem to strike lucky first time while "true love" avoids others. Personally ~ when I find the joy has gone out of a relationship ~ that is the time to move on. Thanks for sharing ~ best wishes ~ Yours BRIAN
July 2nd, 2016 08:20
So long..
Daniel said:
A great poem about the vicious cycle so many people find themselves in, and the difficulty they face in breaking that cycle!
Loved the poem!
July 2nd, 2016 06:52
Daniel said:
A great poem about the vicious cycle so many people find themselves in, and the difficulty they face in breaking that cycle!
Loved the poem!
July 2nd, 2016 06:52
