Comments received on poems by salmaxx
Truth.
salmaxx said:
Here's my first attempt at an acrostic poem. Had a lot of fun writing it so enjoy xx
July 7th, 2016 21:05
salmaxx said:
Here's my first attempt at an acrostic poem. Had a lot of fun writing it so enjoy xx
July 7th, 2016 21:05
Maze.
willyweed said:
yes love will clear it all up.
when love comes you know
but it won't say hello, very nice piece. ww
July 6th, 2016 15:29
willyweed said:
yes love will clear it all up.
when love comes you know
but it won't say hello, very nice piece. ww
July 6th, 2016 15:29
Maze.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SALMA as we get older we discover that LOVE and LIFE are both big mazes. The important thing is not to get lost in them too often ! When we do come out it is always a relief ! Nice poem ~ thanks for sharin' Yours BRIAN
July 6th, 2016 13:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SALMA as we get older we discover that LOVE and LIFE are both big mazes. The important thing is not to get lost in them too often ! When we do come out it is always a relief ! Nice poem ~ thanks for sharin' Yours BRIAN
July 6th, 2016 13:15
Regrets.
ThomasAndrewHitchen said:
I enjoy the juxtaposition and the feeling of coming full circle. Despair to acceptance.
Very well written. Well done :)
July 5th, 2016 05:36
ThomasAndrewHitchen said:
I enjoy the juxtaposition and the feeling of coming full circle. Despair to acceptance.
Very well written. Well done :)
July 5th, 2016 05:36
Regrets.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SALMA ~ Thanks for a very personal ~ tender and cathartic first poem. REGRETS ! I've had a few and as your elegant poem suggests "time moves on and regrets are often impossible to revesre and we have to "move on". I'm a bit older than you and I often think back and say "if only". This is godd because it helps us to "learn by our mistakes (regrets) and move on ! Thanks for caring and sharing BRIAN.
July 5th, 2016 05:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SALMA ~ Thanks for a very personal ~ tender and cathartic first poem. REGRETS ! I've had a few and as your elegant poem suggests "time moves on and regrets are often impossible to revesre and we have to "move on". I'm a bit older than you and I often think back and say "if only". This is godd because it helps us to "learn by our mistakes (regrets) and move on ! Thanks for caring and sharing BRIAN.
July 5th, 2016 05:02