Comments received on poems by Dallmandaisies
An Old Tale
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome DD and thanks for a great first poem ! Great structure and a mega-poem all in rhyming couplets. This give it rhyme and rhythm ~ great to read ~ great to recite. You describe the experience of being in love and loving perfectly ! I can empathise "Because I've loved and lost again (and again !) O what a crazy world I'm living in .....! However (as you hint at) each experience of "love" gives us a better understanding of how to cope and how to do it better next time ! Love the last line "But to see what's on the next page ~ you have to take a look !" Thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ~ BRIAN
July 10th, 2016 16:05
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome DD and thanks for a great first poem ! Great structure and a mega-poem all in rhyming couplets. This give it rhyme and rhythm ~ great to read ~ great to recite. You describe the experience of being in love and loving perfectly ! I can empathise "Because I've loved and lost again (and again !) O what a crazy world I'm living in .....! However (as you hint at) each experience of "love" gives us a better understanding of how to cope and how to do it better next time ! Love the last line "But to see what's on the next page ~ you have to take a look !" Thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ~ BRIAN
July 10th, 2016 16:05
