Comments received on poems by thebettersideofme69
Whirlwind
daniel dawes said:
Short and sweet. I liked it but feel with living this lesson through life you may blow most people away. Im more about flowing like water then blowing like wind. Thanks for sharing as it got me thinking....
August 24th, 2016 02:31
daniel dawes said:
Short and sweet. I liked it but feel with living this lesson through life you may blow most people away. Im more about flowing like water then blowing like wind. Thanks for sharing as it got me thinking....
August 24th, 2016 02:31
Whirlwind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI TBSOM 69 ~ "We all need a little rain sometime" Some of us (and some of our Ladies ~ if the like to sail close to the wind !) can cope with storms ~ BUT ~ Hurricanes blow us away ! Thanks for sharing _ BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 08:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI TBSOM 69 ~ "We all need a little rain sometime" Some of us (and some of our Ladies ~ if the like to sail close to the wind !) can cope with storms ~ BUT ~ Hurricanes blow us away ! Thanks for sharing _ BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 08:23
Awakening
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In my experience ~ REGRET & REMORSE are two of the hardest things to bear. You leave us to imagine the circumstances but in some respect all Men make the same mistakes and bear the same regrets. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 08:18
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In my experience ~ REGRET & REMORSE are two of the hardest things to bear. You leave us to imagine the circumstances but in some respect all Men make the same mistakes and bear the same regrets. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
August 23rd, 2016 08:18
L.O.V.E
AAA said:
beautiful write!!! i love it! can't wait to read more of your work
July 23rd, 2016 13:52
AAA said:
beautiful write!!! i love it! can't wait to read more of your work
July 23rd, 2016 13:52
L.O.V.E
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ~ We all have experiences when LOVE is elusive so we can emphasise ! Always remember that GOD is LOVE and He created us all with the capaciiy to LOVE. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 13:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ~ We all have experiences when LOVE is elusive so we can emphasise ! Always remember that GOD is LOVE and He created us all with the capaciiy to LOVE. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 23rd, 2016 13:50
L.O.V.E
willyweed said:
keep an open heart and an open mind if love you seek love you find
love is hiding where you find it.
nice write friend. ww
July 23rd, 2016 12:33
willyweed said:
keep an open heart and an open mind if love you seek love you find
love is hiding where you find it.
nice write friend. ww
July 23rd, 2016 12:33
ME
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
It is misery not understand yourself, with that, I send positive vibes, and high hopes of you finding yourself, and a better understanding of yourself soon.
~RTBH
July 20th, 2016 04:13
Rosethebrokenhearted said:
It is misery not understand yourself, with that, I send positive vibes, and high hopes of you finding yourself, and a better understanding of yourself soon.
~RTBH
July 20th, 2016 04:13
WILD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Don't fence me in ~ the song of all Wild Stallions ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 10:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Don't fence me in ~ the song of all Wild Stallions ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 15th, 2016 10:37
CrossRoad
willyweed said:
nothing is better than love, as painful as that sometimes can be. like technology its great when its working.
good write! ww
July 13th, 2016 10:21
willyweed said:
nothing is better than love, as painful as that sometimes can be. like technology its great when its working.
good write! ww
July 13th, 2016 10:21
Redemption
willyweed said:
always good to reinvent one's self and reflect on pass experiences.
nicely done and enjoyable. ww
July 12th, 2016 13:42
willyweed said:
always good to reinvent one's self and reflect on pass experiences.
nicely done and enjoyable. ww
July 12th, 2016 13:42
Broken v Unbroken
AlitaOpal said:
Your poem made my heart sink..
Truly amazing 💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 17:05
AlitaOpal said:
Your poem made my heart sink..
Truly amazing 💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 17:05
The game of life & love
AlitaOpal said:
I remember feeling like this at a turning point in my life..
Beautiful 💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 16:39
AlitaOpal said:
I remember feeling like this at a turning point in my life..
Beautiful 💐💐💐
July 11th, 2016 16:39
The game of life & love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for a well structured first poem pulsating with lots of rhythm and random rhyme. The message strikes a bell with most of us ~ because we have experienced the angst of LOVE that was here today and gone tomorrow ! The experience resonates in your final line ! "But you have different plans ~ I was unaware ~ until I awoke and you wasn't there !" O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 10th, 2016 16:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for a well structured first poem pulsating with lots of rhythm and random rhyme. The message strikes a bell with most of us ~ because we have experienced the angst of LOVE that was here today and gone tomorrow ! The experience resonates in your final line ! "But you have different plans ~ I was unaware ~ until I awoke and you wasn't there !" O yes I remember it well ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 10th, 2016 16:26
