Comments received on poems by john
Far Far Away (but not too far)
SauravRHS said:
Good one! But love cannot be expressed in a more subtle way...!
February 18th, 2011 05:51
SauravRHS said:
Good one! But love cannot be expressed in a more subtle way...!
February 18th, 2011 05:51
Broken
Lonelykaren said:
WOW its deep and i LOVE IT. you are an amazing poet and always write more poems please. I actually enjoyed this.
February 11th, 2011 14:16
Lonelykaren said:
WOW its deep and i LOVE IT. you are an amazing poet and always write more poems please. I actually enjoyed this.
February 11th, 2011 14:16
Far Far Away (but not too far)
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I love this...it is so sweet and comprehensive...succinct? Reminded me of what the Lord said in the sermon on Mars Hill in Acts 17..."...though He be not far from every one of us...." Excellent...I really like this poem of yours!!!!
February 4th, 2011 10:37
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. I love this...it is so sweet and comprehensive...succinct? Reminded me of what the Lord said in the sermon on Mars Hill in Acts 17..."...though He be not far from every one of us...." Excellent...I really like this poem of yours!!!!
February 4th, 2011 10:37
Far Far Away (but not too far)
Belinda AMeharry said:
I adore this poem, yet I also believe that LOVE is, everywhere.
February 4th, 2011 09:29
Belinda AMeharry said:
I adore this poem, yet I also believe that LOVE is, everywhere.
February 4th, 2011 09:29
Dreams
Lonelykaren said:
true dreams are nice for me. i like to dream all the time to be someone happy and loving. Ill never let go of these dreams of mine for i know theyll one day come reality. I loved this.
Keep writing please. lol
February 1st, 2011 20:13
Lonelykaren said:
true dreams are nice for me. i like to dream all the time to be someone happy and loving. Ill never let go of these dreams of mine for i know theyll one day come reality. I loved this.
Keep writing please. lol
February 1st, 2011 20:13
My Last Riddle
Cheeky Missy said:
Not funny. Cold, deadly, and dreadfully chilling! La, and reading it, am I complicit in the suicide? Or did I miss the riddle? hmm...rereading it, I think I must've...but what IS the answer?
January 31st, 2011 21:52
Cheeky Missy said:
Not funny. Cold, deadly, and dreadfully chilling! La, and reading it, am I complicit in the suicide? Or did I miss the riddle? hmm...rereading it, I think I must've...but what IS the answer?
January 31st, 2011 21:52
To See Truth open your eyes. To be happy shut them.
Alexandre Landsley said:
Short but makes a lot of sense.......Interesting write!!
January 29th, 2011 14:30
Alexandre Landsley said:
Short but makes a lot of sense.......Interesting write!!
January 29th, 2011 14:30
To See Truth open your eyes. To be happy shut them.
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, sweet! I love the title...makes me smile, so aptly stated. Your comment offered insight on this cute little sad poem....and gave all the more sense to his blindness for it is the old "love is blind" scenario.
I beg to differ though, I've been discovering lately, it seems, that we (or at least, I) cannot but be blind while IN the relationship...regardless how the facts scream in your face, regardless how reasonable you try to be, yet somehow, you never really see until you are completely out of it. Not until you are no longer in it, can you see what you never did in the midst of it. Thus when considering my dilemmas, or trying to reason others out of wherever, I've begun to realize it's next to impossible; for we cannot truly see until we are no longer in it....maybe we can see snatches while involved, but not the ugly reality until we are out. At least that is what I'm seeing lately. Hence, maybe "love" IS blind.
Anyway, my two bits was rather long, hahaha. I love the title and enjoyed this piece, thanks too for the explanatory comment with it.
January 29th, 2011 00:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, sweet! I love the title...makes me smile, so aptly stated. Your comment offered insight on this cute little sad poem....and gave all the more sense to his blindness for it is the old "love is blind" scenario.
I beg to differ though, I've been discovering lately, it seems, that we (or at least, I) cannot but be blind while IN the relationship...regardless how the facts scream in your face, regardless how reasonable you try to be, yet somehow, you never really see until you are completely out of it. Not until you are no longer in it, can you see what you never did in the midst of it. Thus when considering my dilemmas, or trying to reason others out of wherever, I've begun to realize it's next to impossible; for we cannot truly see until we are no longer in it....maybe we can see snatches while involved, but not the ugly reality until we are out. At least that is what I'm seeing lately. Hence, maybe "love" IS blind.
Anyway, my two bits was rather long, hahaha. I love the title and enjoyed this piece, thanks too for the explanatory comment with it.
January 29th, 2011 00:27
Dreams
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, sweet! I love this one....short and sweet, and on one of my favourite pastimes. I keep praying some of my dreams will turn into reality....but ah, they're just dreams.
January 28th, 2011 18:51
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, sweet! I love this one....short and sweet, and on one of my favourite pastimes. I keep praying some of my dreams will turn into reality....but ah, they're just dreams.
January 28th, 2011 18:51
Broken
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very sad. You conveyed the heartbroken state very well. 'Tis an awful picture you painted. Curiously she rather sounds like a demon, the way you are characterizing her charms...if they might even be termed such. Fascinating. And miserable....I hope it is not for real, for it is such a horrible tormented condition.
January 27th, 2011 00:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Wow. It is very sad. You conveyed the heartbroken state very well. 'Tis an awful picture you painted. Curiously she rather sounds like a demon, the way you are characterizing her charms...if they might even be termed such. Fascinating. And miserable....I hope it is not for real, for it is such a horrible tormented condition.
January 27th, 2011 00:47
A Final Dream
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. It is so sweet...bittersweet. And it seems a familiar scene....I think Sir Philip Sydney, and I forget who else, of the famous past poets, likewise lamented such a grief...seeing her only too brilliantly in their dreams....ah, what a very sad story. I hope it is not for real.
January 26th, 2011 22:23
Cheeky Missy said:
Aw. It is so sweet...bittersweet. And it seems a familiar scene....I think Sir Philip Sydney, and I forget who else, of the famous past poets, likewise lamented such a grief...seeing her only too brilliantly in their dreams....ah, what a very sad story. I hope it is not for real.
January 26th, 2011 22:23
