Comments received on poems by jburtv95
Going Through A Storm
isituorme said:
Therapy in words,looking forward to more .all storms end then the sun comes out.
July 12th, 2016 15:24
isituorme said:
Therapy in words,looking forward to more .all storms end then the sun comes out.
July 12th, 2016 15:24
Going Through A Storm
willyweed said:
for sure two heads are better than one, I liked your poem and would like to read more....so get busy.
thankx ww
July 12th, 2016 14:13
willyweed said:
for sure two heads are better than one, I liked your poem and would like to read more....so get busy.
thankx ww
July 12th, 2016 14:13
Going Through A Storm
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JBURT # Thanks for an interesting first poem. Nice structure with good rhythm and ample rhyme to give it flow. We all face dilemma and indecision ~ but as you point out # a problem shared is a problem halved and we all need a special someone to pick us up ~ hold us ~ encourage us and help us make it through. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 13:33
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JBURT # Thanks for an interesting first poem. Nice structure with good rhythm and ample rhyme to give it flow. We all face dilemma and indecision ~ but as you point out # a problem shared is a problem halved and we all need a special someone to pick us up ~ hold us ~ encourage us and help us make it through. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 12th, 2016 13:33
