Heart Astray
willyweed said:

welcome ! your in trouble, follow your heart but consider the ramification's to all concerned. ww

July 13th, 2016 10:27

Heart Astray
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME BCR ~ Thanks for your first poem ! Love the structure ~ NINE neat quatrains with rhyming couplets gives it flow and vibrancy ! The content of your LOVE poem ~ seems to be between the enigma of the "Love you have" and the "Love you wish you had had" ! It happens to most of us and is beautifully expressed in your ultimate stanza ! Wish this love could pass # Be loyal to my lass # This came first # It's here to last. Sounds like Charles & Camilla ! It's all a question of "O Love that will not let me go ................... !" Yours BRIAN

July 13th, 2016 03:59