Always Watching
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks SPS ~ for an elegant poem ~ rhyming couplets with great rhythm ~ but a chilling subject. In today's databank and hidden camera society we are always under observation. We are never alone ~ even when we think we are. Thanks for sharing and your aprehension ! Yours BRIAN

July 15th, 2016 16:41

For the Tree
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME SILENT POET ~ Thanks for sharing such an elegant and melancholy first poem ! Perfect rhyme (couplets) and perfect rhythm ~ we like classic poetry ! Sometimes the weather and the bird song and even the puddles and the pebbles match our melancholy mood. Grey clouds ~ cool breeze ~ tear drops and rain drops ~ breakdown and the sad bird preferring the damp and windswept tree to your crushed company ! I love this poem ~ it made me sad but poetically it is so so beautiful ! Yours BRIAN

July 15th, 2016 01:47