My Phantom Matron
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME JD ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ part fantasy ~ part lustful amity. Love the form of the poem flowing rhyming couplets (love them) and a sprinkling of Shakespearean English sent me back to School ! Lore ~ lock ~ tryst ~ luflic (loving) ~ ushers ~ atop ~ and Spanish ~ despedida (farewell). A great piece of writing in the classic mode ! Love the story ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

July 15th, 2016 14:16