Comments received on poems by RiaAnn
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RIA ~ Thanks for a very positive first poem ! Let me in ~ let me help ~ take my hand ~ let me share ~ together we can be great ~ awesome. "I" is alone and sad ~ "WE" are happy and get things done ! Great structure and a great message. Love it ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 08:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RIA ~ Thanks for a very positive first poem ! Let me in ~ let me help ~ take my hand ~ let me share ~ together we can be great ~ awesome. "I" is alone and sad ~ "WE" are happy and get things done ! Great structure and a great message. Love it ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
July 17th, 2016 08:57