Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
Mt. Zero-Sum (+1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That line “its summit has a thousand fathers, whose abyss awaits the orphan” really lingers. A chilling contrast that deepens the whole piece. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
That line “its summit has a thousand fathers, whose abyss awaits the orphan” really lingers. A chilling contrast that deepens the whole piece. Strong work. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🦇🐦⬛
August 20th, 2025 20:04
Mt. Zero-Sum (+1)
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one made me think. The mountain had a cloud surrounding it and since it would not come to Mohamud he had to go to it. Nice one Kurt
August 20th, 2025 10:49
sorenbarrett said:
Now this one made me think. The mountain had a cloud surrounding it and since it would not come to Mohamud he had to go to it. Nice one Kurt
August 20th, 2025 10:49
Only He Can
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of doing what we are able and looking up to those that can do more. Lovely
August 19th, 2025 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of doing what we are able and looking up to those that can do more. Lovely
August 19th, 2025 10:52
Occam Says ...
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Occam\'s razor is sharpened on this whetting stone of a poem, my dear friend. Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:19
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Occam\'s razor is sharpened on this whetting stone of a poem, my dear friend. Love it! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 19th, 2025 07:19
Occam Says ...
sorenbarrett said:
There is no figuring wisdom for it comes with age and experience not logic alone. A lovely write Kurt
August 18th, 2025 14:44
sorenbarrett said:
There is no figuring wisdom for it comes with age and experience not logic alone. A lovely write Kurt
August 18th, 2025 14:44
Occam Says ...
Poetic Licence said:
I love that, common sense, uncommon, it is so rare these days, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:13
Poetic Licence said:
I love that, common sense, uncommon, it is so rare these days, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 13:13
The Empty Nest
sorenbarrett said:
The excitement of children their innocence and their inquisitiveness it renewing and alive. Nicely said Kurt
August 17th, 2025 14:09
sorenbarrett said:
The excitement of children their innocence and their inquisitiveness it renewing and alive. Nicely said Kurt
August 17th, 2025 14:09
Ukiah At Dawn
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Just wow! An easy fave. Short but a sublime poem. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 16:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wow! Just wow! An easy fave. Short but a sublime poem. Well done! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 16th, 2025 16:56
To The Wind
arqios said:
A stark, minimalist farewell; each clipped stanza sharp with restraint, yet laced with quiet triumph. The repeated refusal (“I’m not going to…”) turns absence into empowerment, while the final image casts the relationship adrift with finality. A concise, cutting release carried off on the wind.
August 15th, 2025 20:33
arqios said:
A stark, minimalist farewell; each clipped stanza sharp with restraint, yet laced with quiet triumph. The repeated refusal (“I’m not going to…”) turns absence into empowerment, while the final image casts the relationship adrift with finality. A concise, cutting release carried off on the wind.
August 15th, 2025 20:33
To The Wind
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job with this poem, Kurt, that says more than what it seems to on the surface!
August 15th, 2025 20:32
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Wonderful job with this poem, Kurt, that says more than what it seems to on the surface!
August 15th, 2025 20:32
To The Wind
Poetic Licence said:
You style is so clever and well thought out, always says so much in few words, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:50
Poetic Licence said:
You style is so clever and well thought out, always says so much in few words, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:50
To The Wind
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says one thing but implies another. Nicely composed my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:48
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that says one thing but implies another. Nicely composed my friend
August 15th, 2025 10:48
Feeling Turned Around
sorenbarrett said:
Another that makes sense in most poetic form Kurt.
August 14th, 2025 11:10
sorenbarrett said:
Another that makes sense in most poetic form Kurt.
August 14th, 2025 11:10
One Final Bow
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This graceful farewell feels like a quiet triumph…a final bow that’s more beginning than end, and I dig that. The “eternity clapping” line is just beautiful…turning the close of one stage into the opening of another. Loved this one a lot, Kurt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 12:04
Tristan Robert Lange said:
This graceful farewell feels like a quiet triumph…a final bow that’s more beginning than end, and I dig that. The “eternity clapping” line is just beautiful…turning the close of one stage into the opening of another. Loved this one a lot, Kurt. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 13th, 2025 12:04
One Final Bow
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A place we are all headed to ... hopefully with a graceful exit.
August 13th, 2025 11:42
Kurt Philip Behm said:
A place we are all headed to ... hopefully with a graceful exit.
August 13th, 2025 11:42
One Final Bow
sorenbarrett said:
I get the picture of life in this poem. Maybe wrong but it applies well with the words given. Lovely my friend
August 13th, 2025 11:26
sorenbarrett said:
I get the picture of life in this poem. Maybe wrong but it applies well with the words given. Lovely my friend
August 13th, 2025 11:26
Now Is Forever
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one feels like holding a firefly in cupped hands...fleeting, luminous, and somehow eternal in its glow. I love how you let “prescience—recalled” loop the reader back into the paradox of time, where the now and memory collapse into one. It’s minimal but potent…a moment you can almost taste in the air. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
August 12th, 2025 10:10
Tristan Robert Lange said:
My friend, this one feels like holding a firefly in cupped hands...fleeting, luminous, and somehow eternal in its glow. I love how you let “prescience—recalled” loop the reader back into the paradox of time, where the now and memory collapse into one. It’s minimal but potent…a moment you can almost taste in the air. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ Well done.
August 12th, 2025 10:10
Now Is Forever
sorenbarrett said:
Truism here it is only the moment that exists all else gone or fantasy. Nicely done Kurt
August 12th, 2025 09:49
sorenbarrett said:
Truism here it is only the moment that exists all else gone or fantasy. Nicely done Kurt
August 12th, 2025 09:49
His Gift
sorenbarrett said:
It is your style that initially brought me to your poetry. Love it in this case as well.
August 11th, 2025 09:53
sorenbarrett said:
It is your style that initially brought me to your poetry. Love it in this case as well.
August 11th, 2025 09:53
Beatify
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully true in it\'s brevity! Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Beautifully true in it\'s brevity! Wonderful write, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
August 8th, 2025 19:56
Cape Cod Mornings
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of differences and yet sameness. Deep as the sea a fave
August 7th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely poem of differences and yet sameness. Deep as the sea a fave
August 7th, 2025 09:26
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