Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm
No Curtain Call
Bobby O said:
That last stanza is eerily exact. And for sure it does reclaim but I propose that w proper vigor and commitment you can use and wear diem every ounce of your youth all by yourself. The Reaper gets what’s left but when my youth provided me options I danced with all to squeeze out the PRIVLEGE I always like your stuff and your angular view.
August 4th, 2023 22:42
Bobby O said:
That last stanza is eerily exact. And for sure it does reclaim but I propose that w proper vigor and commitment you can use and wear diem every ounce of your youth all by yourself. The Reaper gets what’s left but when my youth provided me options I danced with all to squeeze out the PRIVLEGE I always like your stuff and your angular view.
August 4th, 2023 22:42
Dreams Steal Away
Pop64 said:
A seamless flow to this well penned write, all due to the rhyme scheme, but the imagery brings clarity and understanding of \"her\" losing light and life.
July 27th, 2023 10:56
Pop64 said:
A seamless flow to this well penned write, all due to the rhyme scheme, but the imagery brings clarity and understanding of \"her\" losing light and life.
July 27th, 2023 10:56
Free Of Structure
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 26th, 2023 02:05
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 26th, 2023 02:05
Free Of Structure
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 25th, 2023 20:45
Parisab said:
‘-Immortality assuaged’ captivating words as always
July 25th, 2023 20:45
Repudium Tempus
Matriarch said:
It\'s hard to say a lot with a little, but I think you\'ve done that.
July 21st, 2023 16:24
Matriarch said:
It\'s hard to say a lot with a little, but I think you\'ve done that.
July 21st, 2023 16:24
Last Refrain
MR.apocalypse said:
i think this is a beautifully written piece with meaning and emotion behind it
July 19th, 2023 01:21
MR.apocalypse said:
i think this is a beautifully written piece with meaning and emotion behind it
July 19th, 2023 01:21
Twin Sisters
Parisab said:
Mystic quatrains of protest and doubt
Truly admired this amalgam
July 9th, 2023 12:24
Parisab said:
Mystic quatrains of protest and doubt
Truly admired this amalgam
July 9th, 2023 12:24
Dreamsleep (+1)
Jerry Reynolds said:
I really identify with \"The Last Rhyme\". Well written, Kurt.
July 4th, 2023 16:18
Jerry Reynolds said:
I really identify with \"The Last Rhyme\". Well written, Kurt.
July 4th, 2023 16:18
The Devil\'s Ink (+1)
Aradhya said:
\"Depravity’s eye
will never blink
With tears of sorrow
the devil’s ink\"
loved these lines! truly an intriguing piece, dear poet. keep up the amazing work!
July 3rd, 2023 11:02
Aradhya said:
\"Depravity’s eye
will never blink
With tears of sorrow
the devil’s ink\"
loved these lines! truly an intriguing piece, dear poet. keep up the amazing work!
July 3rd, 2023 11:02
Eternity\'s Inverse (+1)
L. B. Mek said:
we strain to subjugate a wild
nature, prism
we invert as inert to presume
as belonging to us
(so deep, wise Poet
thank you!)
July 3rd, 2023 03:08
L. B. Mek said:
we strain to subjugate a wild
nature, prism
we invert as inert to presume
as belonging to us
(so deep, wise Poet
thank you!)
July 3rd, 2023 03:08
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