Comments received on poems by Kurt Philip Behm



Bespoken
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this feels measured and unflinching. The repetition builds a steady moral pressure that doesnโ€™t shout, it insists. Thereโ€™s real gravity in that. I love this, my friend. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 20th, 2026 15:30

Bespoken
sorenbarrett said:

Well written Kurt but I don\'t think that you can hold a politician to any of them.

January 20th, 2026 11:55

Darkness Blackens
sorenbarrett said:

The complications of the language obscure the message and lead to false conclusions. Well said Kurt

January 19th, 2026 12:57

Darkness Blackens
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this is clean and incisive. The restraint sharpens the truth rather than dulling it and tt lands with authority. Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 19th, 2026 10:54

As Ancestors Cry
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this hits, my friend. The restraint makes the loss feel heavier, not lighter. It reads like history spoken under the breath. A powerful write. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 18th, 2026 19:31

As Ancestors Cry
sorenbarrett said:

Legend even more reinforced in that there is no verifiable picture of him known although some claim title none have proof. A lovely write Kurt

January 18th, 2026 12:35

Lock With No Key
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, thereโ€™s a quiet courage in how you let the question stand. The belief is present, the proof absent, and you donโ€™t rush to reconcile them. That unresolved space feels intentional and trueโ€ฆand it impacts. A powerful, thoughtful piece, my friend. Happy Sunday! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 18th, 2026 09:48

Lock With No Key
sorenbarrett said:

A great poem my friend about an intriguing question that all depends on how one defines consciousness. If awareness defines it then certainly there is but if one builds in a self limiting aspect of language then maybe not. It is interesting how man has a way of building tests of consciousness and intelligence that are confined to his own aspects. Maybe we should step outside ourselves and open our eyes to the fact that there other ways to look at the world.

January 17th, 2026 11:44

\"Music Hath Charms ...\" (+1)
sorenbarrett said:

I have always thought the same. Poetry in song is very powerful touching all parts of the body and soul

January 16th, 2026 12:12

False Witness (+2)
arqios said:

Hard hitting stuff here, Kurt. Firing the big guns early in the year shall clear the way. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

January 15th, 2026 20:53

False Witness (+2)
Paul Bell said:

I\'ve never liked the term, stolen. Now, borrowed the odd word, verse, as you do.
Mind you, the biggest plagiar now is definitely, AI.
Essays are easy to spot, they\'re all in Shakespeare.


January 15th, 2026 11:57

False Witness (+2)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, these pieces talk to each other beautifully. One resists borrowed language, the other resists mismatched force, and together they argue for integrity in craft. Writing that fits the momentโ€ฆno more, no less. Strong work. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 15th, 2026 10:40

False Witness (+2)
sorenbarrett said:

Kurt another fave. It has always been a thought that we all steal from past memories, some deliberate and others buried in an unconscious stimulated by something unnoticed. I tend to agree with Ecclesiastes that there is nothin new under the sun and as long It is not deliberate it is not plagiarism.

January 15th, 2026 09:38

Excuses Set Sail
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this is stark and unsettling in the absolute best way. The moral weight doesnโ€™t argueโ€ฆit confronts. Each short line lands like a hard truth weโ€™d rather avoid. Excellent job! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 14th, 2026 16:12

Excuses Set Sail
Syd said:

I certainly agree with this poem.

Great write.

-Syd

January 14th, 2026 15:37

Excuses Set Sail
sorenbarrett said:

Poignant and shoots to the heart in a world ablaze where justice left long ago. Sad and so meaningful. A fave

January 14th, 2026 12:19

Eluding The Cries
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this is lean and incisive. Observation, intention, and avoidance collide line by line, leaving the truth just out of reach. The restraint gives it real force. Well done. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 13th, 2026 20:29

\'Hallelujah In The Wind\'
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this feels quietly expansive. The poem opens a thin place where grief, music, and eternity brush against each otherโ€ฆand it lingers. Well done, my friend! ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 13th, 2026 19:21

Eluding The Cries
sorenbarrett said:

Well said Kurt in such poetic terms and rhyme it is not what we say or see but what we experience that makes us who we are. Lovely and a fave

January 13th, 2026 13:08

\'Hallelujah In The Wind\'
sorenbarrett said:

I can identify with that, love both Bob Dylan and Leonard Cohen their music an inspiration. Nicely done Kurt I have hidden in both.

January 12th, 2026 10:57

Stopping To Ponder
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this reads like a ledger of hard-earned lessons. Each example builds a case for clarity and restraint, and the close lands with quiet certainty. Controlled, thoughtful, and strong. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 8th, 2026 09:57

Stopping To Ponder
Katie B. said:

Lovely, impressive. Enjoyed reading it. You have great talent.

January 8th, 2026 09:45

Stopping To Ponder
sorenbarrett said:

Truth encapsulated in a poem. And so without question I would answer no I wouldn\'t Well written Kurt

January 8th, 2026 09:24

Renewal
sorenbarrett said:

Clever Kurt does that extension light all the lights? I do like the muse being Santa and I have visions of him being like the governor handing out reprieves. A most fun read my friend.

January 7th, 2026 14:01

The Third Neutron
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, this feels charged and inward. It moves like a thought waking itself up, calm on the surface with heat underneath. The restraint gives it strength. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 7th, 2026 09:17

The Third Neutron
sorenbarrett said:

Oh I like this one too Kurt it takes a little more thinking than most but it is worth it

January 6th, 2026 13:16

Darkness Emboldens (+1)
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Kurt, these pieces work together beautifully. The first summons the night where voices gain nerve, the second distills it into a single sensory truth. Time doesnโ€™t just pass hereโ€ฆit scorches. Powerful, restrained writing. ๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธ๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›

January 5th, 2026 18:58

Darkness Emboldens (+1)
sorenbarrett said:

I love the last of the two Kurt it has its own charm. For that one alone I have to give a fave

January 5th, 2026 11:56

Darkness Emboldens (+1)
Friendship said:

Nicely worded.

January 5th, 2026 11:02

If Spread Or Contained
sorenbarrett said:

This poem extends the idea of genius from the intellectual to the moral and emotional. It has always been my opinion that we define it too narrowly that our limited view of intelligence sees only a small wave on the spectrum. A lovely write Kurt and a fave

January 4th, 2026 12:36

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