Comments received on poems by ravage
pain.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAVAGE ~ Thanks for challenging first poem and haunting visual ! I like the structure of your poem and the way you have emphasised the effects of your pain in RED. Life's path is never smooth and in a catastrophe lots of people are hurting and it helps if SOMEONE is prepared to take the Blame. When You or I take the Blame it lessens their pain and consequently ours increases ! Your poem ~ about the intense angst of blame ~ is harrowing but also very true in experience. We should always be willing to accept Blame but bearing the pain is often unbearable. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 01:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAVAGE ~ Thanks for challenging first poem and haunting visual ! I like the structure of your poem and the way you have emphasised the effects of your pain in RED. Life's path is never smooth and in a catastrophe lots of people are hurting and it helps if SOMEONE is prepared to take the Blame. When You or I take the Blame it lessens their pain and consequently ours increases ! Your poem ~ about the intense angst of blame ~ is harrowing but also very true in experience. We should always be willing to accept Blame but bearing the pain is often unbearable. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN
July 19th, 2016 01:00
